This must be the best chapter in the series. Loved it that you made him a descendant of royal bloodline as in FLoV; he does look like he could be a prince himself.
She had lied. For whatever reason, she had lied about her purpose on Earth and shattered his armor with a soaking, see-through dress taut over perfect curves, with eyes deep and blue enough to drown in. And he had fallen for it, almost, and even now the memory feel of her soft body pressed against him was enough to make him want to throw himself in without holding his breath. *pats Kunzite* That's Venus for you and you know you wouldn't be able to resist her.
I didn't know how badly I needed this chapter. There's nothing better than coming home to another look inside my favourite man's head after a terrible morning.
Awww....thanks! I'm glad you liked it. V helped me to sex it up a bit! She's good like that. :)
The part you quoted were the lines that I borrowed from V - pretty amazing right? And she wrote them in like 10 seconds.
I'm sorry to hear that you had a bad morning - Monday's are dangerous like that. I think it's a rule that all Monday's = evil. I'll try to finish up the next chapter soon. :)
Homeboy's got NO CHANCE against a hot, wet naked chick!! Seriously, the other side of this has me hooked...when this one is finished (HINT) then I think I'll try to read them switching back and forth between so that I can watch everything fall into place.
Kunzite's shaping up to be badass. His death scene is going to kill me, too!
I can't wait to start getting into the overlapping chapters. That's going to be a challenge trying to keep canon with my own canon. (If that makes any sense....)
If you think he's a badass now, wait till you see him in part 2 when he's angry. Inspiration struck me in the middle of the night last night and it's already started.
HOW did I miss this??? You know I adored UW, but I think I love RW. There's just something about the way you write Kunzite's POV that completely captures me, my mind is still halfway in the story.
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She had lied. For whatever reason, she had lied about her purpose on Earth and shattered his armor with a soaking, see-through dress taut over perfect curves, with eyes deep and blue enough to drown in. And he had fallen for it, almost, and even now the memory feel of her soft body pressed against him was enough to make him want to throw himself in without holding his breath.
*pats Kunzite* That's Venus for you and you know you wouldn't be able to resist her.
I didn't know how badly I needed this chapter. There's nothing better than coming home to another look inside my favourite man's head after a terrible morning.
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The part you quoted were the lines that I borrowed from V - pretty amazing right? And she wrote them in like 10 seconds.
I'm sorry to hear that you had a bad morning - Monday's are dangerous like that. I think it's a rule that all Monday's = evil. I'll try to finish up the next chapter soon. :)
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Kunzite's shaping up to be badass. His death scene is going to kill me, too!
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If you think he's a badass now, wait till you see him in part 2 when he's angry. Inspiration struck me in the middle of the night last night and it's already started.
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HOW did I miss this???
You know I adored UW, but I think I love RW. There's just something about the way you write Kunzite's POV that completely captures me, my mind is still halfway in the story.
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Now if only the muses would help me to go back to this!!!
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