Mouth Shut

[alizep]

Extra thanks to Lovelylytton and sea_thoughts who helped out with some beta-ing. I can tell this story is already going to be a beast....

Comments= <3

Continued from:  I Don't Wanna Wait

Comments

[venusorbit1]

I know of the dark army growing to the north and I will take Nephrite with me to investigate.

OMG!!! Is this the beginning of EVIL ENDYMION??? I know this theory holds no water except in my own head, but anyways, FFKSLKFJKLSUIEFIO!!!!

Please keep going! I'm on tenterhooks waiting to find out what happens!! Also, Kunzite? Needs to get some. I know a candidate. And no, it's not Adonis. The UST between him and Venus is practically tangible.

When moer, pls?? When???

[alizep]

OMG!!! Is this the beginning of EVIL ENDYMION??? I know this theory holds no water except in my own head, but anyways, FFKSLKFJKLSUIEFIO!!!!
I am going to write an evil Endymion fic for you because it sounds like you really need one. :) But I don't want to give anything away just yet!

When moer, pls?? When???
I started working on the next chapter and it is currently on its 5th rewrite....Kunzite is refusing to cooperate. How can he be a reliable witness when he insists on keeping these secrets from me?!?

[venusorbit1]

You know what I need more? MORE RW!!!! But yeah, I'll take Evil Endymion too! I don't know why Evil!Shitennou bugs me for some reason (unless it's smut) but the merest hint of Endymion working for Dr. Evil makes me go into happiness seizures.

RW also makes me go into happiness seizures, btw!

Yes, secrets bad. Especially when this is going to be the "answered questions" part!! GO ALIZE U CAN DO IT!!!

[alizep]

You know what I need more? MORE RW!!!!
Me too! Maybe you can find my muse for me....last seen kicking back on the beaches of Maui.... *sighs*

I don't know why Evil!Shitennou bugs me for some reason (unless it's smut) but the merest hint of Endymion working for Dr. Evil makes me go into happiness seizures
I like evil shitennou - it's fun when you can write them as not being so nice. But get 911 on the line because you have Endymion working for Dr. Evil - and it will be a smutty dr. evil! (because I am soooo over due for a good smut fic)

[lovelylytton]

Again, the dynamic between Endymion and Kunzite is my favourite part of this installment. They are clearyly friends, but then Kunzite is at the same time superior in terms of experience and (seemingly) authority, but Endymion is still the one who holds all the threads and I loved how Kunzite made fun of that with his mock bow.

[alizep]

Thank you! Endymion and Kunzite do have a really interesting dynamic. I have big plans for them in the coming chapters!

I also updated my post to include my thank you to you for you help. I was so tired last night that I just stuck the story on my LJ and crawled off to bed....

[lovelylytton]

Aww, thank you, that's so sweet (especially considering I didn't do much)!

[alizep]

Nonsense! You did plenty. :)

And I think I finally figured out where this is all going - so yay!

[sugarcross]

This side of Kunzite is very interesting! It brought a smile to my face when reading his witty answers to Endymion's questions. That has got to be one of the nicest Kunzite/Endy dialogues ever. The imagery and feelings conveyed through your words are so tangible that I must applaud you again for a job well done.

[alizep]

I'm glad you liked it! I hope it was nice and Kunzite-centric just like you were looking for. :D

Now if I can just get Kunzite to cooperate with me on the next chapter....

[sugarcross]

Now if I can just get Kunzite to cooperate with me on the next chapter....

Hmm... promise him some quality time with Minako in later RW chapters? Seems like he has found a new personality and becoming a troublesome character for us all these days.

And did I hear you need more nudges for Wiseman fic? Here you can have ... *looks into pocket* ... the Mr & Mrs Smith-esque smut muse that motivates me to write the AR fic. C'mon you know you want to rid Kunzite of his angst so you can continue with RW!

[alizep]

C'mon you know you want to rid Kunzite of his angst so you can continue with RW!
I'm starting to think that he's been enjoying the torturous angst that I've been putting him through.

But oh Wiseman....I have a chapter in my mind, but it's a bit hard to write. There are lots of scene flashes which makes for interesting reading but difficult writing.

I'm sure that with the combination of your nudges and V's cattle prod the next chapter will be out in no time!

[jenbunny]

OMG I loved this! I can't wait to be able to read more of it ^_^. Oh and in response to the reply you gave VO1 ... I'd be interested in reading an Evil Endymion fic too ^_~ I love Evil Endymion, but there are far few too many good fics for him ... at least that I can find >.>

[alizep]

Hmm....there really aren't so many out there. Although I highly recommend reading Angel Electric (if you haven't already read it). Excellent fic. The portrayals of Endymion and his Shitennou are excellent.

[jenbunny]

Thanks, I haven't read it before but I will now ^^

[venusorbit1]

Is that the Lord Chaos one? Because I think I have read it. It's uh...very long. Very, very long. Very, very, very long.

PS: Post smut.

[xxdesert_rose]

Soooo.... Where's the next chapter of your Venus chapter my dear? I'm starting to suffer from withdrawals. But this piece has definitely satisfied me (for now anyway).

[alizep]

Ooh...my Venus story is giving me so much grief....I just don't know what to do with it! After 15 pages I decided that I need to start over. I'm going to send you both versions and you can pick which one gets used. I'm going to need a lot of help!

[xxdesert_rose]

Well send it my way my dear! I'll have a blast with both versions I'm sure. ^__^ Thanks again for recruiting me to help you with your Venus story.

[alizep]

Oh no - thank you for reading through endless pages of my rambling...lol!