I. Uh. Whew. I don't know what to say!! I bugged and pleaded with your for this one for so long that I can't believe it's over!!! It was just so...FREAKING AWESOME!!! I really can't break it down further why I love this fic so much other than saying just 'EVERYTHING'. Because really, it was EVERYTHING. You even manage to make filler sentences interesting, look:
Adonis clenched his eyes tightly so that he wouldn’t have to see the encroaching form eclipse his vision.
He walked heavily up the few steps, his body feeling winded despite the short distance, his mind unable to care.Show me how to do that, please
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You even manage to make filler sentences interesting. Show me how to do that, please! I will trade you - filler lines for kick ass smut lines! :)
I CANNOT FUCKING WAIT until you start the sequel-prequel thing that sheds more light from a different perspective, because there are so many questions! and you know what the big one is?? I STILL DON'T BELIEVE THAT KUNZITE WAS THERE. Well good news on the sequel - it is in the works! (and about halfway done, woohoo) I'm not quite sure of what's going to be in it, but I'm shooting for at least a hinting of smut. (I think I hear the smut van coming down the street....beep beep) As for whether or not Kunzite was really there - I suppose it could go either way. But I promise to attempt to make some sort of explanation. Sure it might just make more questions by the time I'm done....hopefully Adonis is ready to move over and share the spotlight now.
(The absurdity of trying to get the author of the fic to rationalize my insane theories is not lost on me.) LOL! Pst! It was Endymion....
Also I can't believe I didn't catch the awesome chapter title reference: "Nothing lasts forever IN THE COLD NOVEMBER RAIN!" Or I'm just projecting my shitty musical tastes on you.
Sequel almost done??? Holy shit do you work fast! I am pathetic and lacking!
LOL! Pst! It was Endymion....
Wait, does this mean my theory holds water?? WTF!!! This better be explained in the sequel or I will seriously lose my shit!
I've seen Ly before...You can't distract me with her and Adonis, especially after you mentioned that there may be smut in the sequel. Beep beep who got the keys to the van??
I have to finish fanswap entry and polish off Rei prompts, then it's all Econ, all the time for the month of July. Sorry it's taking so long :'( It's the haaaaard part. Every time I think I got it down, I keep adding stuff.
Also I can't believe I didn't catch the awesome chapter title reference: "Nothing lasts forever IN THE COLD NOVEMBER RAIN!" Or I'm just projecting my shitty musical tastes on you. It's funny that you say that - I had the same thought when I was naming the story. Although as great as a song as that was, this is a Maroon 5 song (all of the chapters are named for their songs because I am just not creative enough to come up with my own so I have to steal them from those more creative than me....)
Wait, does this mean my theory holds water?? LOL. Sorry, I couldn't resist. I don't really know what Endymion's deal is, but he does make an appearance in the first chapter of the sequel that is almost ready to be posted.
I've seen Ly before...You can't distract me with her and Adonis, especially after you mentioned that there may be smut in the sequel. Beep beep who got the keys to the van?? It was all that I had. I just got the song lyrics to a Missy Elliot song stuck in my head "beep beep, who's got the keys to the jeep. Vroom..." So there's
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I was determined to finally finish this fic before it joined the pile of other fics that will one day be completed. Now off to the sequel I go!
You write beautifully, and as V has already pointed out, with exquisite lines and descriptions. I'm so glad to hear that the sequel is already in works, because I still have questions, and I still want more!
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I. Uh. Whew. I don't know what to say!! I bugged and pleaded with your for this one for so long that I can't believe it's over!!! It was just so...FREAKING AWESOME!!! I really can't break it down further why I love this fic so much other than saying just 'EVERYTHING'. Because really, it was EVERYTHING. You even manage to make filler sentences interesting, look:
Adonis clenched his eyes tightly so that he wouldn’t have to see the encroaching form eclipse his vision.
He walked heavily up the few steps, his body feeling winded despite the short distance, his mind unable to care.Show me how to do that, please ( ... )
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I will trade you - filler lines for kick ass smut lines! :)
I CANNOT FUCKING WAIT until you start the sequel-prequel thing that sheds more light from a different perspective, because there are so many questions! and you know what the big one is?? I STILL DON'T BELIEVE THAT KUNZITE WAS THERE.
Well good news on the sequel - it is in the works! (and about halfway done, woohoo) I'm not quite sure of what's going to be in it, but I'm shooting for at least a hinting of smut. (I think I hear the smut van coming down the street....beep beep) As for whether or not Kunzite was really there - I suppose it could go either way. But I promise to attempt to make some sort of explanation. Sure it might just make more questions by the time I'm done....hopefully Adonis is ready to move over and share the spotlight now.
(The absurdity of trying to get the author of the fic to rationalize my insane theories is not lost on me.)
LOL! Pst! It was Endymion....
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Sequel almost done??? Holy shit do you work fast! I am pathetic and lacking!
LOL! Pst! It was Endymion....
Wait, does this mean my theory holds water?? WTF!!! This better be explained in the sequel or I will seriously lose my shit!
I've seen Ly before...You can't distract me with her and Adonis, especially after you mentioned that there may be smut in the sequel. Beep beep who got the keys to the van??
I have to finish fanswap entry and polish off Rei prompts, then it's all Econ, all the time for the month of July. Sorry it's taking so long :'( It's the haaaaard part. Every time I think I got it down, I keep adding stuff.
FTLOV pleeeeeze.
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It's funny that you say that - I had the same thought when I was naming the story. Although as great as a song as that was, this is a Maroon 5 song (all of the chapters are named for their songs because I am just not creative enough to come up with my own so I have to steal them from those more creative than me....)
Wait, does this mean my theory holds water??
LOL. Sorry, I couldn't resist. I don't really know what Endymion's deal is, but he does make an appearance in the first chapter of the sequel that is almost ready to be posted.
I've seen Ly before...You can't distract me with her and Adonis, especially after you mentioned that there may be smut in the sequel. Beep beep who got the keys to the van?? It was all that I had. I just got the song lyrics to a Missy Elliot song stuck in my head "beep beep, who's got the keys to the jeep. Vroom..." So there's ( ... )
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You write beautifully, and as V has already pointed out, with exquisite lines and descriptions. I'm so glad to hear that the sequel is already in works, because I still have questions, and I still want more!
Looking forward to it!!
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Very pretty icon by the way!
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I like your icon!
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Thanks. I think I stole it from someone and can't remember who. lol.
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