Comments | alizep: Without A Trace

alizep

Without A Trace

Apr 30, 2009 14:55

Chibi-Usa stood on the balcony off of her room, her eyes looking over the brilliant landscape below her that was shadowed by ominous clouds. She sighed to herself as thoughts and snippets of conversations from yesterday lingered in her mind. These clouds rolled in several days ago and had made no attempt to clear since. It was unnatural for ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

bianca_fiore April 30 2009, 20:33:12 UTC

This was so wonderfully scary and heart-wrenching! I always wondered about the effects of Galaxia on Crystal Tokyo! I would like to see more done in this arc! And having Chibi-Usa as the witness was just a wonderful touch!

The young princess wondered from time to time what changed in all of her mother’s senshi that they no longer thought of themselves as anything but senshi.---AMAZING LINE!

alizep May 2 2009, 16:20:27 UTC

I'm glad you liked this. For Chibi-Usa she wouldn't know about what happened during this time because she was back in the future. So for her to experience in the future what her mother experienced in the past seemed like an interesting concept.

jenbunny April 30 2009, 23:04:03 UTC

That was really well writte, kind of sad but I really liked it. Great Work!

alizep May 2 2009, 16:16:55 UTC

Thank you!

charliechaplin2 May 5 2009, 12:39:47 UTC

Oh nice take on Galaxia, looking at it from the Crystal Tokyo point of view! How clever!

alizep May 6 2009, 01:16:45 UTC

Thank you!