The Bubblegum Murders

[alizep]

Continuation from:  To Be or Not to Be

She sat quietly at the kitchen table, still clad in a pair of light pink pajamas, her knees drawn up with her ankles crossed so that the bottom of her feet rested on the edge of her chair. A plate of breakfast food sat barely touched in front of her next to a tall glass of orange juice and the morning’s paper.

Comments

[lovelylytton]

Minako a murderer? *clutches heart*
I do like what being left behind and the influence of Chaos have done to her, but please let her and Kunzite be happy. But then there wouldn't be any poetic justice, because killing the senshi must be punished somehow..

Him being insecure and her thus being able to tell that he hasn't regained his memories was very clever, it seems so realistic.

[alizep]

Minako a murderer?
It sounds weird when you put it that way....I attempted a rewrite on this. I think I prefer her to be oblivious to her crimes (this way it's more dramatic when she realizes what she is). But I don't want to give away too much.....

Him being insecure and her thus being able to tell that he hasn't regained his memories was very clever, it seems so realistic.

Thank you! It seemed appropriate to show that there are differences in him as well seeing as how things end up.

[charliechaplin2]

Oh My God, is this what happened? This is how the other Senshi went kaput? Ooooh that stupid cauldron, why couldn't Kunz's crystal take her with him?

I don't think I can take anymore fabulous angst. Between you and dhoney my poor heart is being broken into tiny pieces and being fed to ducks. DUCKS.

I bet the Minako inside must be going crazy with despair, the poor thing!

[alizep]

Oh My God, is this what happened?
I have to admit - I was torn between having an army of evil senshi or this. There is just something about good Shitennou and bad senshi. *Pauses to catch plot bunny*

Although I ended up doing a bit of a rewrite on this piece to show Minako as being less aware of Chaos and those happenings. This is probably going to result in further angst though. Oh those ducks....

[sugarcross]

Oh my ... I never thought Minako to be capable of murdering the girls she's so close to. Although given that they had left her behind and Kunzite's sort of betrayal must have hurt her deeply. *sighs* Please don't let her torture Kunzite too much. I don't think I can take the thought of it.

[alizep]

It's unfortunate how the best can just as easily become the worst. Although I can't really speak as to who it is that tortures Kunzite the most....

And the angst continues....

(Good to hear from you again by the way!)

[jenbunny]

:( This was extremely well written and I enjoyed reading it, but so much angst ... it makes me sad (not that I don't love a good angsty story ~_^)

[alizep]

She's so uncontrolled yet trapped within herself. Knowing and not knowing - one day I'm going to continue on this piece.

[dhoney]

*intrigued!*goes off to read previous pieces*

[alizep]

I'm glad you liked this. :)