What Lies Beneath

[alizep]

Continued from Desert RoseThe sheik watched as the blonde haired beauty walked by the edge of the water. This man-made oasis belonged to the sheik and its use was prohibited to everyone but him. That is, with the exception of this one girl. Step by step she wandered into the water, the ends of her ankle length white dress becoming saturated and

Comments

[lovelylytton]

Excellent story! I like the setting, the forbidden love (I'm a sucker for that) and Diamond as the evil sheik. Can't wait for the next part.

[alizep]

Diamond and Kunzite always make for an interesting story. I see Diamond as the evil Kunzite (best of both worlds!).

Next part eh....^_^;

[sugarcross]

I meant to comment earlier, but I didn't have the time. Regardless, I thoroughly enjoyed this multi-parter and can't wait to read the rest already. Diamond desiring Minako instead of Usagi is such a refreshing and exciting change. I can already sense this is going to be another lovely series.

[alizep]

I can already sense this is going to be another lovely series.

I promised myself that I would finish all the other series that I was in the process of writing before starting any new ones - but then this one came along and now I'm fighting the urge to ignore the other stories to work on this one exclusively....

I'm glad you like the story. I've been on a pretty big kick lately with including Diamond in my prompts. He's just such a great bad guy to write.

[sugarcross]

I promised myself that I would finish all the other series that I was in the process of writing before starting any new ones

*nods in agreement* except the plot bunnies refuse to leave us alone. It was by sheer will alone that they remain captured in their cages lest I unleash another gigantic monster of a new story.

*gets back to plotting and editing her unfinished stories*

[alizep]

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Interlude
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*couch*

So yes those plot bunnies.... :)