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alizep

A Twist of Fate

Aug 19, 2008 16:32

“Hime!” Jadeite exclaimed stepping in front of Sailor Moon. He extended his arm out in front of her while unsheathing his sword with his other hand. A deep red glow slowly crept along the surface of the blade, illuminating it with a fiery sheen.
Her other three guardians took their places around her, trying to prevent the masked man from getting any ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

sea_thoughts August 19 2008, 22:31:11 UTC

Oooh, this is really dramatic, I'd love to read a sequel to this. It seems a lot more... tragic than the universe we know.

alizep August 22 2008, 23:16:16 UTC

The Shitennou are almost always portrayed as being extremelly powerful, and I'm sure that they are in their own right, yet I think that evil senshi would be even more so. Usagi would need to become tougher sooner in this war.

sea_thoughts August 23 2008, 19:55:15 UTC

Oh, I agree, evil senshi would be much worse than evil shitennou.

xxdesert_rose August 20 2008, 02:08:49 UTC

*shakes fist at authoress* Why must you be so cruel! This is such a good story and yet you leave us with a cliffhanger! You MUST write a sequel! I demand it!

alizep August 22 2008, 23:42:40 UTC

So I think that brings me up to a grand total of 5 sequels that I owe you now? lol :)

Glad you liked this entry! ^_^