Comments | alizep: ....But You Can't Hide

alizep

....But You Can't Hide

Jul 01, 2008 11:18

Joel loved soccer. Plain and simple - it was the one thing that he could do where he felt completely free. Today was intramural day at his school where the classes competed against one another for the coveted prize of a day off of school. He didn’t care about the prize though, that was for his classmates, he just wanted to run and feel the wind ( Read more... )

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sea_thoughts July 2 2008, 21:48:28 UTC

Oh, poor kid. :( What a terrible thing, to be stalked by a ghost. You can't even fight back. There's an intense atmosphere of fear and confusion in this story, well done.

alizep July 3 2008, 14:49:47 UTC

Thank you!

There's an intense atmosphere of fear and confusion in this story

I'm glad this came across! I was afraid that maybe it would just be confusing! ^_^;

xxdesert_rose July 4 2008, 17:00:58 UTC

I'm actually glad you wrote this. Jadeite hardly gets any love and this story definitely showed him in such a wonderful light!

alizep July 4 2008, 18:57:45 UTC

There can never be enough Shitennou love! I've just been in such a Jadeite mood this past week. Maybe because Kunzite is giving me writer's block.. **grumbles**

I've locked Kunzite in my closet until this block is lifted!

Just so you know....I'm on page 7 of the True Loves story....my drabble is turning into a novel. Well maybe not quite a novel.... **grins sheepishly**