Pt.7 Time Gone By

[alizep]

From the moment Mina started to feel the first pangs of discomfort, she knew that something was wrong. But for reasons she could not explain she did nothing until the discomfort turned into a sharp pain, and even then she waited until the pain brought her to her knees and an ambulance was called to bring her to the hospital. Motoki, panic and dread

Comments

[xxdesert_rose]

You're mean and cruel for leaving it like that! How on EARTH can it just end like that! *starts howling like a banshee*

[alizep]

I object! I would never be so cruel....for more than a few days anyway.... ^_^ **evil laughter ensues**

[alizep]

The next part is up! Enjoy!

http://alizep.livejournal.com/32317.html

[lovelylytton]

Very strong last sentence, well done!