The Omen

[alizep]

She watched with sad eyes as the young boy stood nearby watching as the other school boys picked on the youngest of the group. He could hardly be called a boy anymore as he was now seventeen years old, although compared to her, just about anyone would be considered young.
Her normally long dark hair was pinned up in a bun and covered with a large

Comments

[sea_thoughts]

I really like this. The fact Setsuna tried so hard but yet her efforts weren't quite enough and worst of all, she can see that history is repeating itself yet do nothing to actually stop it. How horrible for her. And you make me feel for Kai, too, brilliant but too damaged to see the fall from grace.

[alizep]

"And you make me feel for Kai, too, brilliant but too damaged to see the fall from grace."

You just summed up my thoughts beautifully!

Setsuna wants to help him, but all she can do is remind him that he still has some goodness in him even after he's given up on himself.

[sea_thoughts]

Aww, he gave up on himself? :( That's so sad.

[alizep]

That is too sad....

**takes back comment and gives Kai big hug instead**

[xxdesert_rose]

I totally second sea_thoughts comments! Hey, I have a request... *looks sheepish* Do you think you'd be up to doing a sequel for the story you did where the Senshi's anime loves met their manga loves? I really did like that story and was hoping you'd write a sequel.

[alizep]

I'm glad you liked my posting! ^_^

I have a terrible case of writer's block for my other stories so I'd be happy for a distraction. Any one in particular you want to see a sequel on?

[xxdesert_rose]

I was talking about True Loves and Everyone Else. That one was really good. But if you're having writer's block, I understand. That's the main reason why I haven't started Duty Comes Before Love. *looks sheepish again*

[alizep]

Ah-ha! I didn't realize you meant the ff.net story. **cracks knuckles and rolls up sleeves** Sequel is on the way!

At least I'm finally getting a title as part of the teasers!