Fic: Joint Celebration (Buffy the Vampire Slayer/Supernatural, Dean/Faith, NC-17)

[aliyaskie]

Title: Joint Celebration
Fandom: Buffy the Vampire Slayer/Supernatural
Pairing: Dean/Faith
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 408
Summary: It takes her about a month to realize that this isn't just about getting to fuck in all 50 states.
Notes: For oxoniensis's Porn Battle VI (The Undiscovered Country) (prompt: roadtrip) and originally posted here. ....Yeah, I have

Comments

[ginevra_alessa]

Awww!!! This is really, really sweet :)

I love Faith's awkwardness and fear of him leaving.

And when he does leave, it's with her hand in his back pocket.

Wonderful line! Also love all the great detail about all the places they've done it and how.

Only feedbacky thing is the word "cocksucker" feels awkward to me because i generally associate that with "asshole" type insult and i think it would feel more natural if he said "because you suck a mean dick" or "you give great head" or like something like that.

Other than that, you got both of their voices down pat. (I did *used to* watch Supernatural)

[aliyaskie]

I already totally told you this, but thanks much for the suggestion! I totally just revised. (Because I can! Yay. :D)

(How is it that I have no icons of either of them? That's kinda weird of me...)

Thanks again. <3 <3 <3