DBSK: lost and found

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lost and found
dbsk: jaejoong, jaeho, homin
g, 1120 words
shim changmin, they tell him. he’s the one who donated your heart - you’re a very lucky young man, mr. kim.

a/n: for people on my flist who wanted jaejoong/yunho. I have no idea how this plotline came about + am disatisfied with many things, but I seem to have lost all perspective on this

Comments

[samikitty]

uhhhhh~~~~ i think my heart aches a bit now!! ^^;;;;;;;;;;;

i really like the style and flow of this. it really read very nicely and with good impact. *O*

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[papered]

thank you! :) I was trying to experiment a bit with the order of things, so I'm glad you thought it worked out.

[angel_9_lives]

;_; I now have a 3 year old sitting in my lap asking me why I'm crying. told her a story broke my heart, and she put her head on my chest to see if it was still beating...I think I'm gonna die from cuteness overload now...;_;

~Angel

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♥ aw, the three year old sounds adorable.

thank you for reading!

[delphien]

A;LSDKFJ;ASLKD
so beautiful :(

yunho-yah, what were you doing in that café anyway?

I don’t know, but I think I was waiting for you.

this made me cry inside.
thank you soo much for writing this ♥

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thank you for reading, :'D

[shinchul303]

This was beautiful. Simply beautiful. And so straightforward, gracefully presented.

Like poetry.

You write really well.

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♥

thank you :">

[amine87]

Beautiful♥ the spacing is perfect, the words are perfect, simply beautiful~

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thank you! :">

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