Super Junior: the beautiful ordinary (1/2)

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Title: the beautiful ordinary: catalogues of a heartbreak
Author: papered
Fandom: Super Junior
Characters/Pairings: Kibum, Kihae
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2618
Summary: corporate!AU. In which Kibum and Donghae are the sons of the heads of rival companies, and nothing works out easily for them.
Notes: Not sure where this came from exactly, and certainly didn'

Comments

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for mei, who demanded a spot so she can yell at me. ♥~

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WAIT I AM DISTRACTED BY THE FACT THAT IT'S "CORPORATE AU"?! WHY DID YOU NOT MENTION THIS ALKSJFLSK YELLING AT YOU FOR THAT. >:|

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I DEMAND THE NEXT PART BE PG-13 AT LEAST.

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while Kibum discovers that Donghae kisses like the ocean, long and wild and sweet.

*__* HI I LOVE HIM.

When it's cold at night, he still dreams of Donghae's smile.

This makes me cryyyy, Liz. WHY MUST YOU INSIST ON BREAKING MY HEART.

It's the same vicious cycle all over again, except this time, Kibum's twice as cynical with his views and three times as cautious with his heart.

I love this line. :9

For a while, they just stand there and look at each other, Kibum taking in the broad shoulders and sharp cheekbones that hadn't been there before. There's no doubt that Donghae had changed, and yet his smile is still devastatingly familiar, his face, heartbreakingly handsome,

LIZ, LIZ, GIVE HIM TO ME OMFG WHY IS HE SO HOT AND ALSO PERFECT :( I'm so biased alksdjfs. My comment has totally degenerated into uselessness...

You must fix them in part two. You must! I will nag you until you do. AND BY FIXING I MEAN SEXING. :D :D :D Hi ilu. ♥

[panda3035]

oh....i like this. corporate AU are always fun to read. so much like Romeo and Juliet

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I've always wanted to try my hand at corporate!AU, :'D. thank you for reading!

[black_goose]

AKJKJLSDA OMG YOUR WRITING. OMG KIHAE. OMGGGG

that said I now demand the cubicle au >:|

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:'D!!!

CUBICLE!AU IS FAILING, ;O;. mostly because a.) I lack plot, b.) idk what should happen next, and c.) I lack plot. ._____. HOW UNFORTUNATE~~

[saix_vii77]

augh, crying ;__;

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:'D ty for reading!

[jumper_on]

OH HEARTBREAKINGLY HANDSOME DONGHAE. ♥

this is fantastic. here's hoping for more chapters!!!

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still need to figure out what's going to happen myself, but hopefully it won't take too long. (I hope, *_*). thanks for reading!