Title: The Physics Of Falling (In Love)
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paperedFandom: Super Junior
Characters/Pairings: Hangeng, Sihan
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 510
Notes: Written with Yang Yu Ying's Tell You Softly on repeat.
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The boy reminds him of himself. Hearing the disjointed Chinese is enough to bring back memories of his own time in Korea. (Maybe that's why he bothers.) )
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You really embodied the "Sihan": gentle, quiet, and honest ^^
Friended :D
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k so, first, the format. i'm usually not a fan of fics written in kind of list form but this seemed to work it as though perhaps this kind of thing is exactly what 'list form' ever came to be used for in fiction.
the strikeouts, italic and brackets are all pretty darn masterfully used too! in direct contrast i actually really like when formatting is used to further develop a story, and it seems to deepen the mood here really well.
At night, it's quiet.
this is wonderful. just the words on their own - four words for that whole part and you're expecting more but it never comes. the sentence seems lonely while still being a sentence in its own right and technically not needing anything more.
It's like he'd been thirsty all these years, but hadn't quite realized it until now.
i love this line, a lot. i'm not sure why but it really hits home and leaves you reeling. but the slight confusion at that point really works because it seems like he's really confused ( ... )
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Thanks so much for the lovely review. ♥ I'm glad you enjoyed this!
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