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Cardcaptor Sakura: 'I Love You's In Unspoken Languages

Jul 13, 2008 15:24

Title: 'I Love You's In Unspoken Languages
Author: papered
Fandom: Cardcaptor Sakura
Characters/Pairing: Touya/Yukito
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1262
Notes: Written after a round of CCS-rewatching, with prompt words given by the flist.

( After dinner, they stand side by side at the sink, shoulders just touching, and do the dishes together. There's a soothing domesticity to the motions, with Touya handing over the washed dishes and Yukito drying them. )

ccs: touya pov, ccs: yukito pov, ccs: kinomoto touya/tsukishiro yukito, !fandom: cardcaptor sakura, category: slash

Comments 40

gokuma July 13 2008, 22:43:47 UTC

Awww! <3 I love the calm flow of these drabbles and I'd love to read more ^^ My favourite ones are: "Hero", "Ring" and "Rhythm"

gokuma July 13 2008, 22:44:47 UTC

I think there's a typo in "Sight":

"Everything you do it magic to me."

papered July 13 2008, 22:48:05 UTC

Thanks for pointing that out! :) It seems like no matter how many times I go through my fics, I always end up with some error or another. All fixed up now.

I'm glad you enjoyed this. ♥

amythest_n_ice July 13 2008, 23:02:33 UTC

Awww, that is sweet, and not enough *pouts* I want more.

papered July 16 2008, 16:42:35 UTC

I've got a couple more prompts left, so depending on how things go, I might end up writing another one. No promises though - it might end up being for Tsubasa or something instead.

Thank you for reading!

24snowyli_chan July 13 2008, 23:10:07 UTC

you can always count on Tou/yuki to deliver sweet and easy fluff--no tragety for these two! loved them all, especially 'ice storm' and 'ring' the writng was lovely ♥

papered July 16 2008, 16:42:46 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed! :) TY.

ozyaoi July 13 2008, 23:21:00 UTC

G'Day that was so sweet lovely little flashes of their feelings.Hope to read more ....ozyaoi

papered July 16 2008, 16:42:57 UTC

Thank you for reading!

narrow_my_bed July 13 2008, 23:30:10 UTC

That was very sweet! The calm feeling and these little slices of their life together really fit this pairing. My personal favourites have to be winter, ring and rythm. As for constructive critism, all I can say is that, yes, the ending line in sight does feel a bit OOC for Touya, but it would seem you're already aware of this.

All in all a very enjoyable read!

papered July 16 2008, 16:43:25 UTC

Thank you for reading! :)