Harry Potter: Kiss Me On The Lips And Put Those Stars To Shame

Jan 01, 2008 18:41

Title: Kiss Me On The Lips And Put Those Stars To Shame
Author: papered
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters/Pairing: Draco Malfoy, Draco/Hermione
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 6278
Summary: A Dramione take on Charles Dickens' A Christmas Carol.
Notes: Written for midnightdream__ for Christmas 2007. ♥ spadul has all my love for her encouragements and betaing. :)

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category: het, hp: post-hogwarts, !fandom: harry potter, hp: draco pov, hp: narrator pov, hp: seventh year, hp: draco malfoy/hermione granger

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knownaskate January 2 2008, 02:43:27 UTC
FIRST! MUAHAHAHAHA!!!1! :D :D :D

Awwww! That was great, Liz! <3 I especially liked the tone of your narrator. :D

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papered January 4 2008, 00:04:37 UTC
:D

TY, KATE! <3

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boleyn January 2 2008, 03:08:06 UTC
Awww this is BEAUTIFUL Liz!! You already know my comments since we're talking on MSN, but I just loved this!! ♥!!

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papered January 4 2008, 00:04:51 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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midnightdream__ January 2 2008, 03:20:38 UTC
AWW. This is so sweet. Such a great way to twist around A Christmas Carol.

Thank you so much. This was so much more than I expected when I asked for this a while ago in your post. This means a lot, thank you! <3.

Happy New Year, Liz!

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papered January 4 2008, 00:05:08 UTC
It was my pleasure. :) Happy New Year, Emily!

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heathenrespite January 2 2008, 06:45:47 UTC
That was superb, I thoroughly enjoyed it! Very smoothly narrated, very bitter and sweet at the same time. Great writing! Keep up the awesome work!

*off to friend you*

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papered January 4 2008, 00:05:20 UTC
Thank you! <3

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philliebird January 2 2008, 19:56:39 UTC
I liked it muchly. Christmas + Draco/Hermione = yay. But I think it would have been more fitting to have Severus be Marley and Dumbledore be the ghost of Christmas Yet to Come.

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papered January 4 2008, 00:14:06 UTC
TY! :) And yeah, I think Dumbledore as the last ghost and Severus as Marley would have worked too. I ended up putting Severus at the end just because I wanted him to be a familiar figure to Draco, who could both comfort him and point him in the right direction more easily than Dumbledore, who Draco has more of an impersonal relationship with. :)

Thanks for reading! <3

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