warehouse 13 fanfiction, myka/h.g. - let the past strike us and go.

Apr 20, 2012 20:55

let the past strike us and go
Author's Notes: This is not just porn. Lol jk it totally is! There is also a gross amount of squishy feelings though. I can't tell what I'm more ashamed of. I'd like to blame it on something, but no, it was all me. It started with a pair of lace gloves. Fairly innocent? Yes. Kinda sweet. In a 'Myka wears gloves for H.G ( Read more... )

fandom: warehouse 13, genre: but there are feelings, genre: literally verbal masturbation, warehouse 13: myka/h.g.

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missymeggins April 20 2012, 12:00:29 UTC
oh my gosh so many feelings. but you'll have to wait til tomorrow for a ~proper comment I'm sorry. <3

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recycledstars April 20 2012, 12:26:37 UTC
How dare you.

(No thank you, ugh, I'm glad you had feelings. That means I didn't ruin them forever with filthy sex.)

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missymeggins April 21 2012, 13:10:55 UTC
I started this proper reply about six hours ago. But I got sidetracked. This isn't going to be coherent or deep at all I'm sorry. Just as a warning.

There are lots of things she can't imagine. In hindsight, she can't imagine ever having wanted anybody else. This is just beautiful and heartwarming and I feel like I can see the look on Myka's face as she realises this.

She breathes out the truth in a tease of air which has Helena tense and on the verge of begging: "I missed you too."

(This is the moment that she realises she's home.)

From behind her, Helena slides her hands around to rest, warm, against her stomach. She drops her mouth to the naked curve of Myka's shoulder and finishes the thought: "Well, actually, I suppose it would be more correct to say I like it when you come back."

They pause like that for a while.

(She finds that love, the constant fact of it, still surprises her.) I just really don't know how to deal with all the emotions in these lines.

(Somehow they do this, manage sex in one breath and affection in ( ... )

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sams_ceara April 20 2012, 15:12:54 UTC
I think I'm speechless. The way you write these characters is exquisite, and I love reading your stories. They warm my heart (yes, I like the feelings - but the sex is excellent, too).

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recycledstars April 21 2012, 02:42:13 UTC
Oh thank you! This comment was so lovely. I kind of what to hug it.

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recycledstars April 21 2012, 02:43:44 UTC
Thank you! :')

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mayireadtoday April 21 2012, 03:37:56 UTC
Wonderful.

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recycledstars April 21 2012, 05:18:37 UTC
Why thank you. :)

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winged_mammal April 21 2012, 15:50:42 UTC
Oh my god. Oh my god. This is so ridiculously perfect and lovely and them and I suck at leaving good feedback but I love it so.much.
This bit especially:
Myka likes to be loved. That’s what she’s used to: she’s never much enjoyed hard or fast or anything out of the ordinary. But Helena likes to be claimed, marked, fucked and Myka loves to do it to her. (For her.) So it’s different, between them. She bites and sucks and scratches and it takes her to an edge and beyond it, undoes her so completely, that she’s surprised at what it does to her.
I love this take on them, and it works so perfectly and gahhhhhh, feelings. *flail*

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recycledstars April 22 2012, 22:58:31 UTC
Oh, I am so glad you think it worked. (Since I am kinda a fan of your writing and think you really get them so I sort of trust your judgement.) And thank you very much. Flaily feedback is always appreciated. ;)

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winged_mammal April 23 2012, 03:52:22 UTC
We'll just have to form a mutual flailing society, then. :p

(Though I think, given my horrible track record for actually getting writing done, that it'll be a somewhat one-sided exchange.)

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