"Have you seen Bonkers, Mai?!" I holler from the inside of my closet.
My cute (she stands at a dainty 5 feet) and quirky roommate, who is brewing coffee in the kitchenette, yells back in reply; "Hung it out to dry! That thing was rotting in the bathroom!"
"You wha--OUCH!" That was me being surprise-attacked on the head by ceiling of my closet.
Mai
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The plot's quite simple but it's really really nice to see how the story unfolds!!hahahaXP I wonder if the boy was really a pervert... hmmm... and he doesn't even have a name... booo...
LOL at the orangutan comment!!XD
but this sounds eeenteresting... me thinks the boy likes the girl... or it's just that he finds her interesting... hahaXP coz... i can't believe he wasn't affected after being called a pervert, orangutan, idiot and stalker...-_-
but such a nice story...^_^ i wonder if there's a part 2...hahahaXP continuation please... what happens at the coffee shop...nyahahahaXD
keep it up!!^_^ *clap clap* *kow tow*
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it's sounds like an anime. who goes to the library? and it seems like they're living in a TINY world where people happen to bump into each other everywhere!
maybe if it were in a campus setting (much like our china experience), it will be plausible.:) hahaha. i KNEW he saw her underwear!!! hahaha! but i thought it was because of a low waist jeans or something. haha!
that's all!:D not bad!
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i was sooo expecting the pants to have some backfire on jill! hahaha although i thought it slipped down or something. lol. such a pervert for that guy to not tell her about the hole!!! hahahaha...but i think i'll eventually like the guy's antics in the coming chapter. *hints hints* ^.~
this is such a cute story to read. i had real fun with it!! something to lighten things up. ^^ utterly lovable. hope you'll continue this! i'll be waiting till then ^^
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