Fringe Fic: Carry It With You [Olivia]

Jan 23, 2011 18:58

Title: Carry It With You
Character(s): Olivia, Olivia/Peter
Word count: 725
Summary: She hadn’t decided if she was going to read it or not yet.
Warnings: spoilers through 3.10 - The Firefly
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Notes: My first Fringe fic and OF COURSE it's Olivia-centric. I'm so predictable. :)

Besides her being alone, none of this was typical. )

fanfic, olivia dunham, fringe

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Comments 18

lint138 January 24 2011, 03:49:45 UTC
Olivia Dunham will kick your ass. I mean, inspire your pen. I hope she keeps it up. Lovely.

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alissabobissa January 24 2011, 06:14:48 UTC
Thanks! (Refraining from being possessive in response. This is a good thing, yes?)

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elialys January 24 2011, 06:16:12 UTC
*happy sighs* I really love you already.

This was beautiful, youcaptured Olivia's voice perfectly. I really love your writing style, especially how you put a lot of details (like her wet hair leaving traces on the cushion *_*). I can just SEE her.

Loved, loved, loved it ♥ Thank you!!

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alissabobissa January 25 2011, 01:16:29 UTC
Oh wow, I'm so glad you like it! All that coming from an Olivia fan as obsessed as me means a lot. :)

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ciderapples January 24 2011, 12:23:15 UTC
alissabobissa January 25 2011, 01:18:40 UTC
Thank you so much for your kind comment -- glad you liked it! I hope I did Olivia justice. :)

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sugangel7 January 24 2011, 15:01:05 UTC
Great introspective piece. I loved the part about how wine and baths weren't her style and the similarities between the tub and the tank.

I loved the image of her hand resting on Peter's chest, and the image of the book in her pocket although she doesn't read it.

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alissabobissa January 25 2011, 01:19:14 UTC
Thanks so much!

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melissa_pbfan January 24 2011, 19:09:37 UTC
This is beautiful.

This just killed me:

He had said it was about finding the answers within ourselves. She liked that, but placed the book back into her pocket.

She was going to have to carry it around with her for a little while longer.

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alissabobissa January 25 2011, 01:22:22 UTC
Thanks! Glad you like. :)

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