TSCC ficlet: In the Light of Loss, [John, Cameron]

[alissabobissa]

Title: In the Light of Loss
Characters: John, Cameron
Word count: 1400
Rating: PG-ish
Warnings: spoilers for the series, not including 'Born to Run'
Summary: In the future, John teaches Cameron the phrase "I'm sorry for your loss."
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Notes: For cynthia_arrow and her new found love of TSCC. It is love, right? :)

Comments

[zargman]

I like it! Thank you, dear... :)

[alissabobissa]

I'm glad you approve! :D

[rose_griffes]

Oh, I like this.

[alissabobissa]

Thanks! Glad you like.

[xbriyeon]

Oh Cameron.. <3

[alissabobissa]

*grins* She is a fun one.

[jesterlady]

Wow! That's excellent. You painted a very dismal picture of post JD as well as a lovely teaching/bonding moment for them.

[alissabobissa]

Thanks! I always see the post-JDay future as a very bleak place where John has to be lonely to lead. Glad you like this. :)

[lint138]

See this? This right here is why I should kick you in the boat to write more. This is a perfect little John/Cam piece. On the surface it appears to be all business, but anyone who knows John knows that much more than mere words are being exchanged. And such rich little details included about the light, and yes, perpendicular. Love it. More, I say. MORE.

[alissabobissa]

I know, I know. I need more motivation. More shall come, I promise.

But thank you. I always love moments between them where the words are almost secondary to the looks exchanged and the body language. It's hard to make that come across in fic, and this was kind of an experiment in translating the visual to words. As alaways, I love that you love it, and your comments are much appreciated. :D