Comments | alissabobissa: Doctor Who fic: The Boy Who Stayed [OC, Amy]

alissabobissa

Doctor Who fic: The Boy Who Stayed [OC, Amy]

Jul 21, 2011 17:34

Title: The Boy Who Stayed
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Amy, Rory, the Doctor, River, Original Character
Rating: PG
Word count: 2000
Summary: "40 years. Today."
Warnings: spoilers through 'A Good Man Goes to War'
Disclaimer: None of this is mine.
Notes: My first DW fic, God help me. For twistdmentality -- HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! -- and for lunar47 who gave me the prompt ( Read more... )

rory pond, fanfic, amy pond, eleven, doctor who

Comments 12

lint138 July 22 2011, 02:27:06 UTC

This is BRILLIANT. You're BRILLIANT. Everything about it is just so... SO. Yes, I love it more than most things. You know I'm going to kick you, hard this time, to write more about the Ponds. It just needs to be done. Head canon, fanon, whatever this is IT.

alissabobissa July 23 2011, 03:25:42 UTC

Thanks, dude. *grins*

aelysian July 22 2011, 02:47:09 UTC

I hate you and I love this. River/Eleven, even in passing, usually weirds me out but the sheer AWESOME of your Ponds blows everything away. I've always kind of wondered how Amy and Rory's time with the Doctor would end and never really felt comfortable with anything. Until this. The way you write the Ponds as an older couple is just...perfect. They're still them but more comfortable and more mellow and the way they have this weird relationship with their sort-of daughter and bluest blue spray paint and the sword on the wall and...

I love it. Now. Helo and Rory conversation! It might explode with the concentration of good - the best - men but do want!

alissabobissa July 23 2011, 03:29:58 UTC

I love that you love this. I always thought the Ponds would end up leaving because they realised they needed to get on with their lives. No horrible calamity or mind-erasing event that forced them to leave -- they just decided. And how couold they have anything but a weird, sort-of relationship with River?

Helo and Rory walk into a bar... I'm on it! :D

lunar47 July 22 2011, 04:32:53 UTC

yay!! This was wonderful <3

alissabobissa July 23 2011, 03:30:21 UTC

Yay! Glad you like. :D

a_phoenixdragon July 22 2011, 05:32:10 UTC

Beautiful...sheerly beautiful!!

alissabobissa July 23 2011, 03:30:45 UTC

Thank you very much!

eriphi July 22 2011, 08:42:18 UTC

This was lovely! Thank you so much for this - still Rory and Amy despite the years. Their reason for stopping travelling was so perfect and bittersweet. The relationships were just right and of course their son would be a doctor. Well done.

alissabobissa July 23 2011, 03:32:53 UTC

Thank you! So glad you liked it. :)