Fic: Earth and Water [Sheppard Whump]

[alipeeps]

Title: Earth and Water
Author: Alipeeps
Characters: John Sheppard, Team
Word Count: 7,400
Rating: Gen/PG-13 for violence
Spoilers: None
Summary: Sheppard risks his life to save his team-mate

Notes: Written for the 2009 Secret Santa exchange for SGAfan.
Prompt given at the end.

Comments

[kriadydragon]

That was great :D Poor team, wet and hurt and cold. Excellent descriptions of the storm and mud. It was an easy thing to picture our poor team fighting all the goop and the water, trying to get to safety.

[alipeeps]

Belatedly realised I very rudely never replied to comments on this fic!! Glad you enjoyed it and that the description was vivid. :)

[tinypenny]

What a great team fic! I love how they stick together no matter the odds.

[alipeeps]

Just realised I never replied to comments on this fic! Apols! Really glad you enjoyed it. There can never be too much teamy goodness for me! :D

[ga_unicorn]

Yay for the Sheppard whump! Very well done and worth the wait.

[alipeeps]

Thank you! Glad you liked it. And apols for the late response! :D

[linziday]

Oh, I loved that!! Hero!Shep is such an awesome Shep. :)

You have such great stuff in here, including: As the shape slipped and slid closer it resolved into a figure - tall, lean and with ridiculously spiky hair that not even a torrential downpour could entirely flatten. Sheppard.

But I think my favorite line is this:

He groaned a little. “Pretty much everywhere,” he admitted woozily. “Feel like I went 10 rounds with Ronon…”

“No chance. You’d be out cold in 6,” Ronon said evenly and Teyla looked back to find him looming over Rodney, grinning widely, rain streaming from his dreadlocks.

Ha! Ronon. :D

[sgafan]

I picked those lines too. Loved them! :D Love the impossibly spiky hair, and Ronon insisting he'd take Sheppard out in 6 rounds. LOL!

[alipeeps]

Heee. So glad you liked the fic. I have a massive soft-spot for Hero!Shep myself... especially when he gets himself whumped in the process! :lol: And Shep and Ronon are such boys.. you just know they'd still be digging at each other even in such circumstances. :)

Apols for the late response to your comment - I somehow completely missed out on replying to comments to this fic!

[zanshe]

Loved this fic. I enjoy how it became them against the elements as they tried to help there own survive.

[alipeeps]

Glad you enjoyed the fic. I very much wanted it to be Sheppard being the hero without it being anyone's fault that there was danger.. it can't always be randomly angry natives! :lol:

I seem to have somehow missed out on replying to comments on this fic so apols for the lateness of my response!