Coming Home

[alimoseby]

This is another one I won't be linking to a comm as I'm not sure if there will be a sequel or not.  Right now I don't plan on one.  But you never know

Comments

[tkel_paris]

Ooh! Oh, poor Doctor. Don't you want to hug him and not let him go until his tears dry a little? D:

And what a cliff-hanger ending! (No pun intended.) Let us know if the muse returns to this! There could be some serious things happening because of this.

Bravo to you and your muse, BTW. Bravo.

[alimoseby]

I do want to hug him. I do. And give him a pretty hanky. That's TARDIS blue of course.

I think there might be something, but I don't want to commit to anything yet.

My muse thanks you. =) It may be attempting to make a full come back...

Glad you liked it, and thank you for the comments.

~Ali ♥

[tkel_paris]

My muse and I are honored when we help someone make a come back. Need any further inspiration, let me know. :)

[bas_math_girl]

ARGH!!!!! This was beautiful and heartbreakingly sad. I might need to go and have a little cry on the Doctor's behalf....

[alimoseby]

*hands you tissues*

Glad you liked it, and thank you for the comments.

~Ali ♥

[serenityslady]

How incredibly sad! And there are so many questions. Why was the Duplicate there? Are they dead, or just in stasis? I hope your muse decides that this deserves further exploration (and possibly a different resolution!)

Thank you for sharing.

[alimoseby]

I...don't know why the Duplicate is there. I hadn't planned on him being there, but it happened. Sometimes these things write themselves...

For all intents and purposes at this time they are dead. The stasis fields were there as mind of a futuristic preservation for future visits, much like how the preservation of Alexander the Great's body was done.

I haven't ruled out a sequel entirely, I just don't know when I would write one. If something comes to me, I will, other that's that, I'm working on that conversation between Wilf and the Doctor for the Belle Series.

Glad you liked it and thank you for the comments.

~Ali ♥

[serenityslady]

Well, then, if (when?) you get back to this one, you have a place to start from! :D

The stasis field idea reminds me of the graves they used in the movie "Serenity". I hope you've seen it, or this will be spoiler-y. I read a fan fiction story once that used the idea that one of the characters was not dead, only in stasis, and they were able to come back later and "cure" him from what killed him, thereby allowing that character to once again join the crew of "Firefly". It was pretty ingenious.

Always. Your stories deserve comments!

[ext_2980597]

I really enjoyed this story. I hope you will write more soon.