A Mother's Wrath

[alimoseby]

So I'm not sure if this one would be okay to link to the doctor_donna comm, so here's hoping folks find it.  It's kind of weird, and not sure it turned out alright, but it's been bugging me for a few days now.  Not even sure the title makes any sense.  I tried to make the TARDIS appear as kind of a light and energy ghost type thing.  Not sure I

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[tkel_paris]

Ooh! Of course the TARDIS could consider them her children. It makes perfect sense, and that she would also use the moment to punish Rose is fitting. And that's a good mention of Zoe and Jamie. (Would you believe I haven't seen them in action yet? Although from the pics I've seen, Jamie was a fine bloke. ;D)

Glad to see something posted. And congrats on Cheeky's birthday! (And I feel for you on the hair and the Barney part. Especially the Barney.)

[alimoseby]

There are 80 some Classic Who episodes on Netflix Instant and one of them (they are in four to six parts, each 24 minutes long) is the 2nd Doctor with both Jamie and Zoe. I watched it, and I have to say I like them. It was a little cheesy, but still interesting. Just from that one episode I have an idea just how hard it was to lose Jamie and Zoe in that manner.

The TARDIS would make a lovely mum I think. =D

I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for the comments. =)

(I really wish she'd hurry up and outgrow Barney. I like my eyeballs and everytime that's on, I want to gouge them out with a spoon.)

~Ali ♥

[tkel_paris]

Ooh, an extra reason to get Netflix! :D That sounds cool. Well, it was the 60s and possibly 70s. What do you expect from sci-fi? :)

She would. Imagine her suddenly having to care for her own child. (Actually, I think TM sort of did that in one scene in a fic. Jenny's Labyrinth, I think.)

You're welcome. :D

(When I'm a mom, I intend to expose my children to what real dinosaurs looked like as early as I think is okay. Oh, Land Before Time will be fine I guess, but I hope I can avoid Barney because he's always annoyed me. And CLASSIC Sesame Street might be fine, but I'm afraid it's become too PC. D: )

=T'Kel=

[alimoseby]

We like Netflix. We don't have any sort of TV, except what comes over the air on the digital antenna. Net flux makes up for that quite nicely.

I will have to find and read that one then. :)

(Sadly, Cheeky was already in love with Barney when she came to us. Netflix does have 12 Classic Sesame Street episodes, but very rarely do other shows hold her attention. Netflix had Dora the Explorer which I could tolerate better than Barney but its gone now. U less its Land Before Time she wil sit and whine for Barney.)

[bas_math_girl]

I don't remember much about Zoe and Jamie (I haven't re-watched it since I was a young child) but I was devastated Jamie left. :(

Anyway, lovely reference to them and the Doctor's previous angst. The TARDIS would naturally think of them as her children; why else would she be so indulgent and unconditional in her love? I'll be naughty and admit I loved Rose being punished here whilst Donna got her forever and to keep the Duplicate.

(I was subjected to Bob the Builder and Fireman Sam, but I'd still take them over Barney)

[alimoseby]

I've only seen the one episode, and I have to say, Jamie was pretty good looking. And Zoe was adorable.

I am so glad the mother thing can be seen so well. :D I'll be naughty with you and say there was an evil grin on my face while I wrote Rose being punished.

Thank you for the comments, and I'm so glad you liked it. :)

(Cheeky's foster brother has a thing for Bob the Builder, and Thomas the Tank Engine. Her former foster mother is slowly being driven insane... :P)

~Ali ♥

[serenityslady]

“My children,” the golden figure whispered in their minds. “You are complete.” Most beautiful sentence I've read in a while. The Doctor and Donna do complete each other. And I always love "the Duplicate is regressed to a baby" stories!

Idris said all the things that should have been said to Rose on Satellite 5, way back then. Interesting how, out of all of the things Idris told her, Rose only heard the part about Donna being his wife! Typical. She only hears what she wants to hear.

"But the Tenth One had mercy. He let you live. He let you stay. And when you were sent to that Other Universe, it was a blessing." Absolutely!! And I don't think it was love that prompted him. It was guilt.

Happy birthday to Cheeky! Three, huh? Good luck! :D

[alimoseby]

I've done the Duplicate as a sibling, but never as their son. He gets a chance to start over and they get to be parents. And yeah, they do complete each other in so many ways.

*snort* Rose is still a whiny child. With very selective hearing.

I don't think Ten loved her either. It was guilt and a large dose of fear of being alone so close after losing his people. That's what I think anyhow. :)

Thank you for the comments and I'm glad you liked it. :)

Folks say the terrible twos are the worst. I think it's the threes. She's got a mouth on her and can be incredibly defiant. Four time outs yesterday alone.

~Ali ♥

[dm12]

I never got the Ten loves Rose thing either. He always seems to be heartbroken when a companion leaves, but he didn't shatter until Donna. Donna does complete the Doctor. I liked this story and how the TARDIS takes into account her Thief's sensitivities before doing what needed to be done to Rose.

As for daughters... it never gets any better once they get a mouth on them. It just keeps going and going! Don't even get me started on Barney and the newer Sesame Street!

[alimoseby]

Glad you liked it. =) Thank you for the comments.

Blech. Barney is driving me bonkers. >_>

~Ali ♥