The TARDIS Intervenes Part Three

[alimoseby]

Yeesh.  That was weird.  Thank the Lord for the "switch to old version" link.  DNW a new posting thing. =/

Anyhow, this is it.  Finally.  The third part of this three part oneshot.  I hope it doesn't disappoint.  It's going to be rated R because of some language and character death.  Lex kind of took over with the anger and such.

My muse for this

Comments

[docdonnaforever]

I'm in love with this story!! I was so mad at Lex though. I understand his anger and wanting to make the Doctor feel pain, but by dragging Donna and Belle into it saying those horrible things I just wanted to have a go at him myself. Your writing is beautiful and you got into the character of the sick mindset very well:) I'm blown away!!

[alimoseby]

Thank you. =) I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the comments.

~Ali ♥

[tkel_paris]

Whoa... Man, all that anger and shock and loss. Those outbursts needed to happen, and even that fight.

I get Lex's words, and knowing that you wouldn't have been raped if not for the Doctor's idiocy is a powerful reason to not trust him. That's NOT something that can be gotten over easily. That said, he was aiming low blows at the Doctor. But then again, maybe the Doctor needs to think more about what he's doing and why - and what should be done.

So... I don't condone some of the things he said, but I understand. I can only imagine what will happen when Belle asks about them, and how far Donna will go to make sure Sue is okay.

Bravo, BTW.

[alimoseby]

There was a lot of anger. More than I was expecting actually. It just kind of wrote itself. O_o

I'm not entirely sure Ten is going to talk to Belle about it at all. I have a few ideas batting around and they all involve Ten going off the deep end just a tad.

I'm glad you liked it, and thank you so much for the comments.

~Ali ♥

[bas_math_girl]

Oh my goodness! I don't know who to comfort first here, as they are all suffering. But I suppose my greatest sympathy lies with Lex; he desperately needs someone to love and be loved by unconditionally. *hugs him*

Powerful stuff brilliantly written, love.

[alimoseby]

Like I said, this ran away from me. =P Lex is definitely traumatized. Upside is I might know more of where this is going, so I can maybe get some more written.

Glad you liked it, and thank you so much for the comments.

~Ali ♥