Comments | alimoseby: Sleep Sweet

alimoseby

Sleep Sweet

Nov 16, 2012 13:20

I am one of those with severe JE ending denial, but this just wouldn't leave me alone. And I'm kind of in a sad mood, so the timing I guess was right. So I figured I'd just sit down, get it written and have done with it. Wasn't sure if I was going to post it, but thought I would anyhow. Fair warning, it's sad. But you probably already knew it ( Read more... )

ficlet, tenth doctor, doctor who, donna noble, pg-13

Comments 12

bas_math_girl November 16 2012, 21:38:05 UTC

*sobs*

This is such a fitting end. If Donna can't be restored to the TARDIS then this should have happened. :(

alimoseby November 17 2012, 06:21:51 UTC

*hands you tissues*

Glad you thought it was a fitting end. Can I just say that I may have shed a tear or two writing it? I feel like that's weird, but there you are.

Thank you for the comments.

~Ali ♥

serenityslady November 16 2012, 21:59:53 UTC

Oh, Ali. This is heartbreaking!

I agree. If JE had to happen, then Donna should have died. I, however, would have encased her ashes in the TARDIS itself. But perhaps that would have been even more painful for the Doctor.

*sigh*

alimoseby November 17 2012, 06:29:06 UTC

It was. And it matched my mood of the past couple of days. This will be the first holiday season without Dad in law, and now hubby's uncle has had an aneurism and his future is pretty uncertain right now.

I thought about Ten keeping her ashes somewhere on the TARDIS, but then I thought she should have a more permanent place of rest. Eventually the Doctor will die, and from what I understand, when he dies, the TARDIS does as well, and fades away. A planet, while by no means permanent, is more permanent than the TARDIS. Thus she has a permanent place of rest. I also thought having her ashes on the TARDIS would cause more pain for the Doctor.

Thank you for your comments.

~Ali ♥

katherine_b November 16 2012, 23:59:24 UTC

*viciously wipes eyes* A beautiful, lovely, gorgeous, heart-rending piece of writing.

alimoseby November 17 2012, 06:30:59 UTC

*hands you tissues*

Thank you for the comment.

~Ali ♥

motoko1969 November 17 2012, 10:36:55 UTC

This is beautiful... I love the fact that he gave her the stars in the end.

Very well done... and now I am going to go and have a good cry over how unfair Donna's destiny is in JE...

alimoseby November 18 2012, 06:57:26 UTC

Thank you. I never thought about that. Him giving her the stars. I like that. =)

Her ending was so very unfair.

Thank you for the comments.

~Ali ♥

akhilanda November 17 2012, 15:53:50 UTC

*sniffle*
gorgeous work love

alimoseby November 18 2012, 06:58:08 UTC

Thank you. =)

~Ali ♥