take me away to someplace real (2/2)

May 16, 2012 19:21

Title: take me away to someplace real
Author: alifeofourown
Pairing: Niall-centric, hints of OT5
Rating: Mature
Word Count: 8,721 (4,659 in this part)
Summary: Niall feels like he might just end up cracking under the pressure at this point.
Warnings: Verbal abuse, trigger warnings for disordered eating, general Niall angst
Dedication: This goes to my precious anons ( Read more... )

rating: mature, genre: hurt/comfort, band: one direction, person: niall horan, genre: angst, person: harry styles, pairing: ot5 tbh, person: louis tomlinson, person: liam payne, person: zayn malik

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twist204 May 17 2012, 00:14:46 UTC
That was such a heart breaker. I liked the way you wrote the boys together, and the way they helped Niall.

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alifeofourown May 17 2012, 02:29:39 UTC
I didn't mean to break anyone's heart! I'm sorry. D:

But thank you so much for the nice compliments and thanks for reading!

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des_etincelles May 17 2012, 01:12:29 UTC
Oh my god I hope you don't mind but I am in no shape or form to give you a decent comment or any sort of coherent sentence.
I loved loved loved this. It was so heartbreaking but so beautiful!
Thank you for writing this!

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alifeofourown May 17 2012, 02:30:48 UTC
This is definitely a decent comment! Thank you so much and thank you for reading and commenting!

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raspberry_buzz May 17 2012, 03:26:11 UTC
This was amazing. I felt so sorry for Niall. The emotion, it felt so raw and real.

Thank You so much for this!!

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alifeofourown May 17 2012, 03:29:10 UTC
Oh goodness your comment is so lovely. Thank you for reading and commenting!

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badjujuboo May 17 2012, 10:33:44 UTC
this was beautiful. such a wonderful and real look at what verbal abuse can do and how the outcomes can be so devastating not only for the person its directed at but those around them. wonderfully written and handled!

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alifeofourown May 17 2012, 10:51:52 UTC
Thank you so much for the kind words. I was just trying to do the prompts justice and took it a little bit from my own experiences in life so I'm really glad that it sounds realistic.

Thank you again for reading and commenting!

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loribeast May 17 2012, 20:40:16 UTC
this is beautifully written, and you can really empathise with niall. oh poor baby. this sort of broke my heart but in the best possible way, and all the ot5 was just a lovely addition, and oh gosh i just wanted to hug him the whole way through. parts of this were really hard-hitting and the emotion was so real, and you didn't sugar-coat bulimia at all which is great, because it's not glamorous and you didn't portray it like that. i just thought this was lovely and a great fill for both prompts.

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alifeofourown May 17 2012, 20:56:18 UTC
oh wow thank you so much. i didn't mean to break your heart i could try and put it back together? also i genuinely don't understand how people can even think that eating disorders are glamorous because they're so far from it that it's not even funny. thank you so much for your lovely words and for reading and commenting. it means a lot to me, really.

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