The Church and Its Orbs - Deserving

[alien_writings]

More The Church and Its Orbs. This scene is related to a plot development that was *very much* my characters deciding to do something without my telling them to do it. Oh, characters!

---------Someone knocks on the door as I’m pacing in Diana and Jocelyn’s guest room. My heart leaps into my throat. Since I leave for Harmony in less than a week, my

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[pixiebelle]

Oh poor Brandon :(

What a mess for all of them. I do think you handled the emotions well, I found it all believable and it felt heartbreaking to read it. I hope things work out for all of them somehow.

[alien_writings]

I'm glad the emotions worked for you. Romantic angst and heartbreak aren't my usual playgrounds, so I'm like "can I even DO this?" While it sounds a bit weird to say I'm glad you felt any kind of sadness, I'm glad this felt heartbreaking. Poor Brandon, indeed. :(

This particular love triangle? SO not planned! It really was weird, that Wren and Gemma were like "we're going to kiss" and I'm like "I didn't TELL you to do that!" Wren even SAID she didn't "go for girls," which was obviously a lie. It's not like Gemma was any more believable when she said the same thing, heh.

I hope things work out for everybody, too.