Comments | alien_writings: Crossover: I Prefer the Mind Control/The Church and Its Orbs

alien_writings

Crossover: I Prefer the Mind Control/The Church and Its Orbs - At the Same Time

Sep 22, 2013 09:59

A little experiment about two characters from different universes meeting. Enjoy!

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“Can I sit here?”

( I look up, and my jaw fucking drops. )

character: wren, fandom: the church and its orbs, character: dylan, pov: dylan, fandom: i prefer the mind control, writerverse, rating: r, trigger: language

Comments 2

pixiebelle October 1 2013, 06:30:53 UTC

I think this was a really interesting idea and I liked the way you broke the fourth wall, it was very creative. But as always with Dylan... I just can't get over the word fuck being used so much. I find it distracting to an otherwise super awesome story. But I really liked this and would love to see your stories go big and then see this published somewhere because how fun would that be?

alien_writings October 3 2013, 17:53:32 UTC

One of Dylan's primary charms is his breaking of the fourth wall. As a narrator, he just can't help himself. I like to joke that he spends a lot of money at Home Depot because he's always breaking walls.

I'm sorry his cursing is so off-putting. When I go back to his story, I will keep in mind that, while it's in-character, some people don't like that level of profanity. His story needs (yet another) overhaul, anyway! No, Dylan, you don't get to be my NaNo story. You were my NaNo story LAST time I won NaNo. Don't be greedy. :P Also, Dylan, if you try to get in a cage match with Gemma over who gets to be my NaNo, she will kick your ass.