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alien_writings

The Church and Its Orbs - Growing Up

Sep 02, 2013 23:36

More The Church and Its Orbs possible-canon experimentation. Enjoy!

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I know I’m staring at Wren, but I can’t stop myself.

( 'Is that dress going to be at all appropriate for your Testing Ceremony?' I breathe. )

pov: gemma, trigger: violence, character: wren, original fiction, series: the church and its orbs, rating: pg-13, character: gemma

Comments 2

pixiebelle September 5 2013, 05:47:18 UTC

I love the world building here. I think it's really coming together and you've made an interesting, believable world!

alien_writings September 5 2013, 06:49:53 UTC

Yay, I'm glad you think the worldbuilding is good. This chapter is pretty much "let's infodump about the world while Wren angsts."

I really need to figure out how functional humans organize things and start writing down notes in an orderly fashion, or the worldbuilding will turn into a mess soon enough!

Did you get my email where I said I would change red orbs to green for better color contrast with the purple?