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The Church and Its Orbs - Surprising Help

Aug 30, 2013 23:07

More possible canon for The Church and Its Orbs. Enjoy!

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“Well, if it isn’t the girl who threw a Soul Orb at a priest.”

( My heart stops when I hear that voice -- it’s Officer Riley. )

pov: gemma, pairing: wren/brandon, character: wren, series: the church and its orbs, character: diana, rating: pg-13, character: gemma, character: officer riley, original fiction, character: brandon

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pixiebelle September 3 2013, 05:52:13 UTC

Your world is very complex and continues to get more and more complex as you go on. It's so awesome. The different communities, how the lower classes have more freedom... It keeps things interesting and real :)

alien_writings September 3 2013, 06:05:14 UTC

I need to make sure to keep all my worldbuilding straight! There is already enough of it that I might get myself confused without proper notes. (I should start taking notes!) My latest chapter was mostly about trying to figure out worldbuilding, and I'm worried it might contradict this one -- well, I'm going to make another draft eventually anyway, so it's okay if there are minor inconsistencies? Tell me if you spot any?