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alien_writings

Cliffton Fanfiction: Intractable - Chapter 4

Mar 14, 2013 16:13

If you want to read the previous chapters in this fanfic about Devin's mental instability, they are linked below.
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---------It’s been weeks, maybe months, maybe longer since I got stuck in the Home for the Intractably Insane. Don’t know how long I’ve been in here. Time flows wrong in this place -- it’s got no meaning. Sometimes I wonder ( Read more... )

fanfiction, trigger: mental illness, 500themes, pov: devin, fandom: cliffton, trigger: death, trigger: violence, character: devin, writerverse

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n3m3sis43 March 15 2013, 00:43:06 UTC

Aw, poor Devin. I think it's even sadder now that he realizes Eric's a ghost and he still wants him to come back because he doesn't have anyone else. He really doesn't at this point. :\

This is really well done. Al creeps me right the hell out and the whole place sounds scary. I liked the idea of it being a scary maze inside the Home For the Intractably Insane. When Al was trying to get everyone to confess to helping Rose escape, I was worried he would just punish everyone if no one admitted to helping her. That's always a fun trick adults liked to do to trick kids into confessing to things.

I wonder what MaxiSec would be like.

alien_writings March 15 2013, 00:59:54 UTC

Al is one creepy, creepy dude. I'm glad he's working as an antagonist type -- I wish I had been able to use him for the "cue evil laugh" challenge.

The whole Home is...not a pleasant place. I shudder to think of what the MaxiSec is like if the regular ward is as bad as it is. There's probably solitary confinement and constant restraints and stuff like that. :/

I'm glad this is working for you, emotionally. Poor Devin -- he is not having a good time of it, is he? :(