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“Holy shit, your planet is a giant fucking rainbow,” I breathed. Swirls of various colors twisted and turned slowly, creating a fucking hypnotic effect. Seriously, it was hard to turn away from all the color.
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Still, I eventually turned to Xan excitedly, feeling a grin spread across my face. )
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I was amused by the conversation between Firi and Syra. I take it Firi has taken the Princess's stance on Zimaran sexual practices too, huh? Nice to see that. :)
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When I edit this (draft 3? lol this one is taking a lot of rewrites) Dylan will freak out more. I think he might actually freak out on Xan in the next chapter, at least? That might be what happens in the next chapter -- they get set up in Xan's Palace apartment and Dylan freaks out because Xan is even more clueless than Dylan is (which is not an easy feat).
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