Comments | alien_writings: The Tomorrow Trilogy Fanfiction: Decisions

alien_writings

The Tomorrow Trilogy Fanfiction: Decisions - Chapter 1

Feb 04, 2013 19:21

This is going to be a fanfic based on The Tomorrow Trilogy by theun4givables.

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"It's nice to see you again, Ryin," Jordine murmured as Ryin sat down across from her at the negotiation table.

( Ryin smiled; if last time were any indication, these negotiations should go well. )

character: jazz, fanfiction, character: ryin, fandom: the tomorrow trilogy, character: jordine

Comments 4

theun4givables February 5 2013, 00:24:25 UTC

Oh, Ryin. Why couldn't you have done this in my canon instead? I already see much happier times coming along for you, in this. And Jazz, oh, Jazz. I love how grumpy you are when someone interrupts you getting laid. I'm sure Savin just kept going while you were on the phone. I'm honestly surprised there weren't any gasps from Jazz, because that's just how Savin is lololol. But I guess they got off the phone quick enough.

I also love love love that Ryin said that it wasn't like Jordine would kill him for rejecting her. Oh dude. In canon she does. You don't know how close you came to biting it, dude. Thank you for keeping it in your pants in this. xD

alien_writings February 5 2013, 00:48:13 UTC

He couldn't do it in your canon because you have a severe allergy to happiness that lasts more than, like, half a minute?

I just had to put that line in the story. Half the fun of this is knowing just how badly things go in canon. Because they go SO BADLY OMG.

I think I am making up for my previous fic where I somehow made things worse than canon.

n3m3sis43 February 8 2013, 04:02:49 UTC

Too bad Ryin doesn't have this much sense in the actual canon. Then he might have, you know, not died. Unless she really is going to up and decide to kill him for rejecting her. Because, you know, you and your oh-so-subtle foreshadowing. But I'd love to see a story where Ryin doesn't die, so I won't give up hope just yet. I'm gonna pretend that line didn't mean anything. :)

The part where Ryin interrupted the "negotiations" between Jazz and Savin to talk about it amused me. Jazz was just like "busy nao, kthxbai".

alien_writings February 9 2013, 14:00:14 UTC

Haha, that line was more a nod to canon than my usual sledgehammer-tastic foreshadowing. I seriously hope Jordine doesn't kill Ryin in this, since I, too, would like to see Ryin not-die. Part of the point of this story is Ryin's actually getting to be alive. For once. Since even the High School AU kicks off with his death.