Comments | alien_writings: I Prefer the Mind Control Rewrite

alien_writings

I Prefer the Mind Control Rewrite - Chapter 14

Jan 16, 2013 13:38

previous chapter

May be slightly NSFW.

---------Time itself moved differently in Xan’s bedroom; how else could I explain how it became 10PM by the time we were done having sex? Seriously, there was some kind of black hole vortex wormhole spatial anomaly in his room. Or possibly in Xan himself, specifically in his cock . Yes, Xan had a spatial ( Read more... )

pairing: xan/dylan, character: xan, character: preston, character: dylan, 500themes, series: i prefer the mind control, pov: dylan

Comments 4

theun4givables January 16 2013, 20:17:58 UTC

Oh Dylan. Dylan Dylan Dylan. You keep thinking about Xan's offer because you so desperately want to take him up on that offer. You want to get away from Earth and run away from your problems but it doesn't work that way, dude. It won't fix everything. I promise you it won't.

And poor Preston bbbbbb. He was worried but he also doesn't want to be near Dylan and awwww. I feel bad for him, too. The poor guy needs a real big hug.

alien_writings January 16 2013, 20:26:42 UTC

I hope Dylan realizes it won't fix all his problems to run away from Earth. If/when he does go to Zimara, I don't want it be because he decided to run away from his brain. You can't run away from your own brain, dude. It doesn't work; trust me on that one.

Preston does need a big hug. Poor dude. :/

n3m3sis43 January 18 2013, 18:34:56 UTC

Dylan's shown that he believes he just can't be happy on Earth, no matter what. I've pointed out before that I think he can't see past his own issues and wants to run away from them by physically leaving the planet. Dude, your issues are going to come with you.

Do you think he has any actual feelings for Xan, or is it all just a lust/escapism thing at this point?

I felt so bad for Preston in this chapter. Poor dude. :\

alien_writings January 18 2013, 18:46:36 UTC

To Dylan's credit, he does actually realize he's trying to run away from his problems. Xan doesn't exactly help with that, as you'll see when you look at Chapter 16.

I'm not 100% sure what his feeling for Xan are. There's so much mental crap around them with all the escapism stuff and everything else, that I don't think Dylan even knows.

Preston? He really does get the short end of the stick, doesn't he? Poor dude, indeed. :/