The Tomorrow Series Fanfiction: Who Will Lead Us? - Chapter 11

[alien_writings]

This is Chapter 11 in a fanfic of The Tomorrow Trilogy by theun4givables.

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It had been more than a week since Jazz had left. He had said he would be back in “a week or less,” and it had already been longer than that. The first day after a week had passed, Savin hadn’t worried too much, but now it was three days past when Jazz had

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[theun4givables]

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I am so glad they finally made up because I don't like it when they're unhappyyyyyyyyyy.

Savin being nervous at the beginning of this was perfect. Their little talk after they discussed how unlucky Jazz had been with getting support definitely hit me right in the feels, dude. Savin knows when he's been an ass and is more than willing to apologize once he does. Jazz being snippy was perfect -- this is exactly how he is when he's hurt. Amazing job, dude. :)

[alien_writings]

Aw, thank you! <3

My first instinct was "Jazz would get all snippy, wouldn't he?" Being that this is fanfic, I'm less likely to trust my brain, but I'm glad my instincts were right this time for this piece.

[theun4givables]

You're welcome. :)

Oh Jazz can be very snippy and this is the sort of situation where he'd be snippy in. Definitely. xD Trust your instincts a bit more -- you know these characters better than you realize.

[n3m3sis43]

Awwwww, I'm glad they made up. Jazz was dumb. Savin was an ass. It happens in relationships, especially in times of stress. Eventually, you have to work it out and move on, and I'm glad they are doing that now.

Hm, their army doesn't sound very impressive. Jordine will not be pleased.

Yay, more jokes about Jazz getting shot all the time! I narrowly avoided making one in my fic chapter this morning, so I'm extra amused that you did. :)

[alien_writings]

No, Jordine will not be pleased. D:

I'm glad Jazz and Savin made up, too. I'm not sure how long they'll have to enjoy their made-up state, though, alas.

I really can't resist the "Jazz gets shot all the time" jokes; they're too much fun!