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I Prefer the Mind Control Rewrite - Chapter 7

Jan 10, 2013 17:49

This is the 7th chapter of I Prefer the Mind Control. It's NSFW.

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Xan shifted uncomfortably on his feet. “Maybe it’s time we all went to sleep. I set some pajamas on the beds in the guest room for Preston and Dylan.”

( 'Uh, thanks,' I muttered. )

pairing: preston/dylan, character: dylan, 500themes, pov: dylan, nsfw (actual sexual content - really!), character: xan, character: preston, series: i prefer the mind control

Comments 5

theun4givables January 11 2013, 03:05:27 UTC

Oh, Xan. You really DID want Dylan, didn't you? I'm sure Jirrin will give you a heavy talking to about that later. And Dylan. Dylan, bb, I think you still want Xan, too. Though Xan's definitely gotta fucking earn your affections, now.

Also unf the awkward "first" time sex. I know it technically wasn't Preston's first time anymore but that WAS the first time he had ever been inside someone instead of having someone inside him. lolol Also, the accidental mind controlllll. Poor bb has no idea he's half Zimaran -- talk about one hell of a way to find out something was up.

alien_writings January 11 2013, 13:32:19 UTC

Oh yes, Jirrin is going to chew Xan out for being a dysfunctional mess.

It wasn't Preston's first time, but it WAS his first time without mind control. Well, his first time not being under the mind control, anyway. ;)

Poor Preston's brain is going to be utterly scrambled, and now Dylan has to help him unscramble his brain when Dylan's own brain is pretty scrambled.

n3m3sis43 January 13 2013, 05:41:44 UTC

Is there a trope for virgins (or almost-virgins) who are magically awesome at sex? Just wondering, because Wes fits that (in some versions of my headcanon, at least) and apparently Preston does, too. I liked that this sex, while hot in places, was more sweet and loving than anything else. I mean, Dylan clearly got his rocks off, but I'm sure he needed the comfort. :)

Oh, and also? Now I want to know what the "...other things best left for later" Dylan found along with the lube are, haha. Why won't you tell me? Whyyyyy, author?

alien_writings January 13 2013, 11:25:11 UTC

There probably is a trope for (almost) virgins who are awesome at sex. There is a trope for EVERYTHING!

Dylan definitely needed the comfort this time.

The Mysterious Things of Mysteriousness? Perhaps those will be revealed in a later chapter. ^_^

pixiebelle January 16 2013, 05:28:03 UTC

Things just continue to get complicated for poor Dylan... but at least this was more sweet than before. And Xan needs to clean up his act and make it up to Dylan before I'm completely on his side again... Preston is so far being too awesome to him for me to root for the other guy. But knowing the story, I'm sure that will change!