The Tomorrow Series Fanfiction: Who Will Lead Us? - Chapter 9

[alien_writings]

This is the ninth chapter in a fanfiction of The Tomorrow Series by theun4givables. This time, theun4givables herself wrote the first section of this as part of a collaboration challenge for writerverse.

---------Jazz sat down in the small meeting room, his fingers itching to fix a tie he wasn’t actually wearing. Instead, he ran his fingers over his hair, smoothing it back some. Savin

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[theun4givables]

Jazz really, really needed to unload all of that guilt. When I was writing that i was like holy shit, dude, he's like, confessing EVERYTHING to Ravi and I totally didn't expect him to do that. Ravi just happened to be in the right place at the right time.

I love, love, love the part where Savin's all "Wait i apologize but not really but wait I do." Because that's so him. And Jazz wouldn't know how to really respond to that, either. Poor bbs.

I also feel bad for Riley, man. I always think he's awesome no matter which universe he pops up in but in this he seems so subdued and it's nice to see for his character, actually.

[alien_writings]

This is a rough universe, even for snarky law enforcement agents. I'm glad that subdued aspect of his character works for you. When I saw Riley in my mind in this, he was very...exhausted and stuff, which, yeah. This universe just sucks for its inhabitants.

I'm glad the Savin non-pology part worked for you. :)

And, poor Jazzzzzzz. D:

[n3m3sis43]

IT'S NOT MUTUAL. Hahahaha.

Man... Jazz deserves to feel guilty. THAT WAS DUMB OF HIM. Although Savin is being kind of an ass. It's not Jazz's fault he wasn't around to vote, dude. He needed to leave in order to, you know, NOT DIE? But it's understandable that Savin would be that pissed. His child just died because of a super dumbass move on Jazz's part. Good job, dude.

So, apparently I have some opinions about that decision Jazz made. I really don't like it when people don't vote for themselves, okay?