The Tomorrow Series Fanfiction: Who Will Lead Us? - Chapter 8

[alien_writings]

This is the eighth chapter in a fanfiction of The Tomorrow Series by theun4givables.

Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5, Chapter 6, Chapter 7

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Nem grinned at Jazz. “This control room has special security measures. Nobody outside it can possibly know what goes on in here, just like with the phone I gave you. Awesomesauce, yeah?”

Comments

[theun4givables]

Jordinnnnneeeeeeeeeeeeee. BB. I can't wait until she's in StD. I hope she gets a lot of lines once she is. Because homegirl needs some screen time. ;)

Oh man, the scene with Jazz and Savin once they're finally alone? My heart. My poor heart. bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbs. Savin, I know you're mad and upset and have a lot you're going through but you gotta let Jazz in. He feels bad, too. <3

The scene with Ravi and Jazz is perfect. Poor Ravi, having no idea how to help Jazz and not being let in.

[alien_writings]

I'm glad you liked the Ravi and Jazz scene, because BOTH of those guys are difficult to write and putting the two of them together? Lol, I was like "what am I dooooing?"

I'm also glad the Jordine scene worked for you. She scares me, haha.

And aww, J&SSSSSSSSS - and the next scene in my fic is them having a "too personal to really be about strategy" argument. :/

[theun4givables]

lol I know, dude. It's okay, it'll get easier over time.

Jordine is amazing because she scares me, too. I love writing her. lolol

I knooooow. I can't wait to see that.

[n3m3sis43]

HACKER IDOL! I LOLed so hard at that. I WAS FOURTH PLACE, DAMMIT. <3

Aww, poor Jazz and Savin bbs. Does Savin know Jazz voted for Mitchel? My brain is borked and I forget. Either way, I can see how he might not be ready to talk about things yet (with anyone, not just Jazz) and I can also see why Jazz would blame himself, since the whole situation kind of is his fault. Whoops.

I loved how everyone was "fine" in this chapter. We sure do have some "fine" characters in our stories, don't we?

[alien_writings]

Savin does know Jazz voted for Mitchel. That was revealed in an earlier scene. I, too, can see why Jazz would blame himself because yeah...BIG mistake voting for Mitchel, there.

We do have some "fine" characters, indeed! lol

Woo, HACKER IDOL! ^_^