The Tomorrow Series Fanfiction: Who Will Lead Us? - Chapter 6

[alien_writings]

This is the sixth chapter in a fanfiction of The Tomorrow Series by theun4givables.

Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5

---------Jazz and Ravi stood at the very edge of the City. They were almost at the desert itself, but they weren't far enough away from the Palace. A single convenience store sat at the corner of the street. Jazz gestured to

Comments

[theun4givables]

Oh Jazz. You don't need to constantly act as if you're not hurt, dude. I promise. Pushing through it isn't always the best option. Sometimes it's perfectly okay to rely on others.

I love how Ravi kinda disappears from Jazz's focus as soon as Savin shows up. Because at that point, Jazz really would just focus on him. He wouldn't notice anyone or anything else, especially that close to passing out.

I love the shit out of this fic so much. I really do. :)

[alien_writings]

Oh Jazz is right! He's lucky he made it to the compound while so sick (again).

Vanishing Ravi? That happened completely by accident. I didn't even mean to make Ravi disappear; he just kinda did it on his own, lol.

Aw, I'm glad you love this so much. <3

[n3m3sis43]

I LOLed so hard IRL at "everyone's favorite gunshot victim". Jazz sure does get shot a lot, doesn't he? I like that he did finally let Ravi help him, even though he was stubborn as shit about it. And that he and Savin were reunited and then Ravi is not part of the scene anymore after that because he's irrelevant. Awwww. :D

Is Ravi an NB in your fic? Has that been explained already? I guess this would be a good reason for me to stay caught up, because I can't remember now. Doh.