Crossover - Cliffton/Meeting of Breccan & Finbar: Not So Divine: Chapter 8

[alien_writings]

This is a crossover fanfiction of my The Meeting of Breccan & Finbar and n3m3sis43's Cliffton universes. For context, it might help to read n3m3sis43's piece, Everything You Touch.

Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5, Chapter 6, Chapter 7

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Egan's dead. He can't be, but he is. No pulse, nothing. Fucking nothing. Gone.

Comments

[n3m3sis43]

My poor bbbbbbs... although I have to admit I was amused by parts of this, too. There's something wrong with me, isn't there? Never mind, I really don't need you to answer that question.

I find it amusing how the standard reaction to Devin seems to try to choke him to death. Guess I can't blame them there, really. Fortunately, Wes has his amazing fighting technique that's probably going to end up getting him killed someday in my canon. Oops, spoilers. But really, I'm not even sure of that. It's just a suspicion.

Yay, Brendan finally has a line! Go Brendan. :D

Why do I suspect this isn't going anywhere good? Oh, yeah. Devin has godlike powers. That was my first clue. The second one was probably seeing your outline for the rest of the story. Anyway, still really enjoying this. <3

[alien_writings]

Brendan will get more than a line when he has an epic fic of his own, if everything goes according to plan, Of course, this whole fic didn't go according to plan. Egan? Yeah, he wasn't supposed to die, as you know. So, I have little faith in Cliffton-related stuff obeying me, though I think Brendan might be more cooperative?

Sadly, I wouldn't be surprised if Wes' "fighting style" gets him killed. :/

I tend to write things where humor pops up in random places. As I've said, the tone of my stories often decides itself, with little-to-no input from me.

[lilycobalt]

Awww Devin omg I never thought I'd say that.

[theun4givables]

I say it all the fricken time, but I'm writing Relapse. Think I know that boy as well as I do my own characters, at this point.

But in this fic? Maaaaaan. Poor Devin, dude. Just. And here I thought *I* was being mean to him. This fic takes it up to 11.

(I'm nicer than Sarah too because I'm going to fucking let him have something happy. For once. lolol)

[n3m3sis43]

I let him have happy things! I just take them away 10 seconds later. Wow, I think there might be something really wrong with me. That's just horrible, isn't it?

[alien_writings]

I believe I have done my job then. Yay making you have emotions for the character! ^_^

[theun4givables]

You're meaner to him than I am.

If the rest of your outline is anything to go by, anyway. Never thought I'd fucking be saying that, though. xD

[alien_writings]

Yay, I win? Haha

[n3m3sis43]

Dude. I think she might be meaner to him than I am.

[theun4givables]

I knooooow. It's killing me. lol