The Mix-Up
Yup, I wrote fanfiction, from the world of the Tomorrow Trilogy by my friend theun4givables. This story is a plot thing I have been wishing would happen for some time, so I made it happen, at least in MY version of events, haha.
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I don't even know what the point of this is. It's been what feels like hours of waiting in this exam room, and the damn ( Read more... )
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I don't even know what the point of this is. It's been what feels like hours of waiting in this exam room, and the damn ( Read more... )
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It's a good thing this happened when things were "good" between them, lol. I especially love that Jazz wasn't going to take none of Savin's overreaction. Because for Jazz, his birth status is no longer an issue to him. I love that Savin went after his dad, too. xD
There's just so many little things in this that are awesome and spot on. <3
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Aww, yay, glad you liked it! This headcanon has been in my head for a while now, so I'm happy I finally tried to write it out. This was a lot of fun to write. Doing fanfiction is pretty strange, lol. This one was weirder than doing the Devin/Egan one because this time my POV character wasn't one of my own. So thanks for your help in making this awesome. <3
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Really liked the way you showed Savin's progressive denial, and the contrast between that and Jazz's easy acceptance. Good thing at least one of them is okay with it.
Pretty sure anyone would be honored to have you write fanfic for them. You did a great job. :)
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Denial is one of my favorite emotional states to play with, in case you couldn't tell by the kinds of characters I tend to write. ;)
I'm happy you thought I did the voice well. That's what scares me about fanfiction most, getting the voice right.
"When in doubt, add something pervy," is a good strategy for writing Savin, isn't it? Lol
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