all things in perfect place

Oct 01, 2011 22:39

one world there
one world not
one world remembered
one world forgot
one man happy
one man sad
one man appreciating what
one man never had

light all the lights that never were here
secure all the locks
and leave the cat to uncertain fate
sealed within your lead-lined box

inspired by a Wytch, the Doctor and that Cat

poetry, unedited, writing exercises & experiments, writing

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wytchcroft October 1 2011, 22:04:28 UTC
holy wow!
that's fantastic - it's as tightly constructed as the box it talks about - and - and - i wish i'd written it!!!! (curses! curses!)

:)))

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alicia_h October 1 2011, 22:18:15 UTC
Thanks, as always! :-)

And I had a fit of the "I wish I'd written that"-s when I read your Alice pieces!

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wytchcroft October 1 2011, 22:29:35 UTC
LOL! :)

well, yay us! and i do really like this piece :)

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betsycontent October 1 2011, 22:36:41 UTC
you're right, i love it! bravo! poor schroedie!

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wytchcroft October 1 2011, 22:52:51 UTC
yay! :))

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alicia_h October 1 2011, 23:37:54 UTC
Hello! Glad you like it. Thanks for your kind comment. :-)

And, yes, it's hard not to feel sorry for our favourite, much mistreated, quantum puss.

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betsycontent October 1 2011, 22:38:34 UTC
p.s. that one went into my memory box. :)

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