What Makes a Man (a Mark/Eduardo fic)

[alicedawkins]

The first time it happens, he's wearing a large hoodie because it's kinda chilly. The first time it happens, he's wearing flip-flops because his only pair of sneakers got ruined in the rain and the mud the day before. He's standing at line on the coffee shop, and the barista, a cute girl with red hair, tells him What are you having today, sir? He

Comments

[hellodeer]

The problem with making plans that involve another person is that another person is an incredibly unstable variable. oh my god so true ;_; i loved this line and.

So. So so so so. This is awesome. It took me a little time to figure it out, but when I did, I was like "Oh" (no really, I said "Oh" irl). Aaaaaand this is amazing and awesome and don't those mean the same thing? Whatever whatever, I like this. :3

[alicedawkins]

Thank you, you're too cute! The summary on mark_eduardo gives it away, but I wanted to see how it worked without one, and I'm glad it did.

[untiltimeends]

Not gonna lie, I rarely read these kind of fics, but I'm really glad I ventured in here because I like it a lot. <3

[alicedawkins]

ME TOO! I, like, hate AU! But this thing took over my brain. This is why I say plot bunnies have a life of their own.

[yellowwolf5]

this was amazing! loved the whole believing/not believing in magic. kind of hardbreaking ;___; Great fic!! :)

[alicedawkins]

Thank you! I'm glad I could pull this off, and that you liked it. =]

[skate_soar_fly]

I clicked on this on a random whim. I'm glad I did. Really well done, I enjoyed it. :)

[ezboard_1]

oh my goodness <3