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[brokenangelred]

Title: Looking Glass Chapter One
Fandom: Alice in Wonderland (Tim Burton)
Pairing: Alice/Hatter
Rating: G
Word Count: 2662
Summary: Alice returns home after a year of adventure to find herself even more at odds with her surroundings than before she left.

Comments

[kira_bouviea]

Oh my, what a lovely start to the story!

[brokenangelred]

Thank you, I wasn't sure about it at first I'm still coming down off writing a big(65k) Regency AU fic for my other fandom so pretty much everything I write has a ball in it now, it's like I've forgotten how to advance plot through another means.

[zaftiq]

It's so maddening that you won't tell me what happens next. It's going to be darling, though, I can tell :D

[brokenangelred]

Just look in my ear when I'm a sleep and dreaming about it.

[zaftiq]

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STOP BEING SO CUTE! I'll have to beat the ladies off with a stick.

[brokenangelred]

This is where the evaporating skills come in handy. *hug-dodge*

[yahalomay]

This is brilliant! I enjoy the Looking Glass immensely. Poor Alice, without her mother and even her sister, for all intents and purposes. Also, your Alice is pitch perfect. =) I look forward to the next installment!

[brokenangelred]

Oh god, I'm so glad. I never write women and I'm always worried that I'm just making them a boy in dress... mostly because what I generally write about is boys in dresses.

[yaycoffee]

Oh, lovely beginning! Your Alice Voice is perfect, and the whole feel of this is just right! I can't wait for more :-)

[brokenangelred]

Thank you, I really love Alice as a character. She is just a perfect contradiction in all incarnations. Both too young and too old for her situations. I think she is so love able because, well, who do doesn't fell like that half the time?

If I had the time and felt like being slightly more neurotic than I am I would try and make everything representative of a mathematical concept but sadly I have a job. Grumbles.

[jillianfish]

I thoroughly enjoyed this. I can definitely see Alice not being at home in England and always wanting to go and do and see more and more fantastic things. I'm excited to see how this turns out and how everyone in Underland is doing (not too good by the sound of it).