Comments | alice_tarrant: Because there isn't enough fanfiction on here already...

jinma_chan in alice_tarrant

Because there isn't enough fanfiction on here already...

Mar 12, 2010 20:46

Yep, another! Wrote this afewhours ago (so helpful to my creative flow, trying to get this out while watching the forst series of 'Supernatural'. Friggen monsters ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

chocolate_inyx March 12 2010, 09:51:36 UTC

SO not boring! It was really sweet.

jinma_chan March 12 2010, 11:19:32 UTC

Thank you!

spaciireth March 12 2010, 10:54:58 UTC

Oh, goodness, now I'm not going to be able to unsee Iracebeth as Queenie, lol! I do love Queenie a lot though, so that is okay. :D

As chocolate_inyx said, certainly not boring! I liked this one especially, your descriptions were very good, I could smell the things Alice was as I was reading. And on another good point, I was hoping for there to be something new up for me to read before bed.

And on a final note, this line made me giggle:

Though she had not the slightest clue as to what 'muchness' was, she had enough sense to be concerned and even a little offended to be told she had lost it.

jinma_chan March 12 2010, 11:26:40 UTC

Yeah, I told a friend about it, and on the phone all I heard was: "... Oh my god! I didn't even think of that!... Oh my god!".

You could smell it? Hope it didn't get up your nose too much :D

I'm glad I gave you a bed time story!

Alice did seem to dwell on the subject of muchness through the film, did she not? Seemed right for her to think about it under the hat...

verseblack March 12 2010, 12:30:13 UTC

Oooh, I do like this! It seems like people don't focus much on scent, so it was fascinating to have these sense captured so aptly here!

jinma_chan March 12 2010, 22:28:56 UTC

Thank you!

I iamgine his hat would be very fragrant indeed, if only because of the various food and driks thrown towards the owner :D

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jinma_chan March 12 2010, 22:37:12 UTC

Hehe, I totally agree with that!

Thanks! I seem to write alot of ambiguous Alice/Tarrant fics in which they aren't even in the same vicinity...

This is a very unusual style for me... but it seems to be working ;D

faerionette March 12 2010, 20:03:03 UTC

Your descriptions are so amazing! It seemed as though I could feel and smell all the things Alice was. :3 Very nice story! ♥

jinma_chan March 12 2010, 22:41:54 UTC

Thanks!

Smells seem to be popular around here... and hands ;p