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tygati January 25 2008, 16:20:30 UTC
*happy little sappy puddle of angel fangirl* Mmmm... I still adore this story so very much... *purr*

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alice_montrose January 25 2008, 17:23:40 UTC
*snuggles* I'm glad you like it.

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miikarin January 25 2008, 16:31:07 UTC
Oh! I remember this story. I especially enjoyed reading this then and still enjoy it now.

Skimmed through most of it, but in the Epilogue, I think that Michael's response to "So this is your decision..." is a bit odd if he says "I have..."

Ohh, the mental imagery is positively tantalizing for Michael and Lucifer.

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alice_montrose January 25 2008, 17:24:45 UTC
Good point. I think I changed some stuff there, originally. *goes edit*

*snugs Michael and Lucifer* They deserve to be happy, regardless of their location.

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kiyoshi_chan January 26 2008, 06:47:10 UTC
Didn't I read this on your website? :O I remember going AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH because c'mon angelslash! *glomps you*

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alice_montrose January 26 2008, 07:15:23 UTC
I have no idea whether you read it or not? But yes - angel slash. Because it's fun. And Lucifer needs hugging. And Michael needs to be less emo. XD

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kiyoshi_chan January 26 2008, 10:41:24 UTC
*laugh* *glomps* I did, not long before I started chatting with you on AIM, I believe. Lucifer needs lots of loving. I mean, talk about being forever in love! *________* Also Michael needs to be less oblivious, you mean. ^_~ Man, Michael, way to have things spelled out for you.

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alice_montrose January 26 2008, 12:18:20 UTC
I mean, talk about being forever in love!

And talk about letting his loved one defeat him and not peep a word, eh! Poor Michael felt a bit like a fool when he found out. *snuggles them both*

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moonriddler_mim January 26 2008, 10:28:55 UTC
oh wow. love! this is so darn good!

poor Lucifer for having to fight against the voices all the time. but he must be truly strong to manage it.

good work you! ^___^

(but where is teh smut?) ^_~

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alice_montrose January 26 2008, 10:37:52 UTC
*bows* Thank you. It's not a new story, but... yeah.

*snuggles Luci* In my interpretation, him originally being the first Archangel grants him extra powers to fight those voices. Though I'm pretty sure he gave in to temptation a couple of times. XD

(but where is teh smut?) ^_~

Sadly, it wouldn't have fit the overall mood. :( So, um... interpret those kisses anyway you want? *wriggles eyebrows suggestively*

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moonriddler_mim January 27 2008, 17:07:32 UTC
and me being totally illiterate when it comes to christianity and religion, I find this very interesting! if I ever read the bible it will be for historic and story-wise value, not for the belief. I love a good story. ^_^

Sadly, it wouldn't have fit the overall mood.

no, you're right about that! but the setup was right there! *laughs*

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alice_montrose January 27 2008, 17:19:37 UTC
in Heave all is as it was in the beginning. and it comes through darn well!

*relieved sigh*
You will also notice that I have kept to the Christian belief of God as a man. That's because only a man would be jealous and selfish enough to force Lucifer to fall. A woman, even a bitchy one, would not have been that merciless. >_<

Lucifer is totally love and he needs a thorough humping! ^_~

You might be right. Though I believe he'd rather be the one to give Michael a humping, instead. Silly Lord of Hell! *shakes head*

if I ever read the bible it will be for historic and story-wise value, not for the belief.

Duh! Logically! It's why I read it in the first place. I cannot conceive how it can be considered as a Holy Book and preached about. It's full of contradictions, especially between the two Testaments. Moreover, the Old Testament is more like a history manual of the Hebrew people.

but the setup was right there! *laughs*Yes, it was. But a sex scene there would have been utterly useless. And I am not one to bump up the rating on a ( ... )

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_calex_ January 27 2008, 16:02:27 UTC

*shivers* That was just... wonderful. Your descriptions of the angels, of Heaven and Hell and... it's just beyond words.

I love your portrayal of Michael's doubts about God and the feelings between Michael and Lucifer, how changed and unchanged and.. and I'm just a babble of incoherent mess right now. It's beautiful and painful and so much LOVE.

Your portrayal of Lucifer, I find, very poignant. How despite all that was done to him, there's this deep, abiding sense of love he has yet for humanity, his fellow angels and God. And mostly, his love for Michael. How the voices of Hell tempt him continuously and his struggle with it, trying to retain his sense of... agape. Ah, what's the word, unconditional love (yes, I did do Religious Studies for five years, was it that obvious? :P ).

And I have no more words, so again, I will reiterate how much I adore, adore, adore this. If this story was person-shaped, I would huggle it. *beams*

... And you have really made me want to write angel!slash. *facepalm*

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alice_montrose January 27 2008, 16:12:09 UTC
*glomps* Thank you. This story, though often overlooked, is still one of my favourites. What can I say - I guess I'm a little blasphemer after all. XD Besides, I'd always wanted to write a "humane" Lucifer, so this is the result. *snuggles him*

Ulterior reasons behind reposting this? Me? Why no, I am sure I have no idea what you are talking about. *smiles angelically* (pun intended)

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_calex_ January 27 2008, 16:23:27 UTC
Well, you've certainly succeeded. I really did love your portrayal of Lucifer's pain. *huggles him, too*

Yeah, yeah. Whatever you say. Although I've finished two on my to-do list, so I suppose I have time...

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alice_montrose January 27 2008, 16:28:01 UTC
Luci is conflicted. Though I know he has "evil" periods, too. *pets him*

Better get to it then!

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