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Jun 18, 2010 17:40

Supernatural, Dean/Castiel(/Sam?), Dean has no idea why, but there are erotic poetry magnets appearing on various parts of the Impala

( Comment_Fic prompt: (Erotic) Magnetic Poetry )

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mingsmommy June 18 2010, 22:23:00 UTC

HOly crap. This IS gorgeous. Gorgeous.

alicat713 June 18 2010, 22:38:11 UTC

It makes me so happy when you read something of mine, especially things that are outside of our shared fandoms. Thanks for putting such a huge smile on my face.

smacky30 June 18 2010, 23:12:46 UTC

I'll admit to reading this only because it's you. I've seen - maybe - 2 eps of Supernatural in my life. I have to agree with Ming (I hate that she's always right)...it's beautifully written. The mood of it is a little dark with a faint sense of hope woven in. Just gorgeous.

alicat713 June 19 2010, 00:11:12 UTC

Awww, now that is LOVE. I really appreciate you stopping in and reading this and leaving me such kind feedback. You guys are the absolute best, you know that?

hrtslkths June 18 2010, 23:49:54 UTC

Dude. Duuuuuude. That was amazing. I'm quite glad it was so long because I didn't want it to end :)

So poetic, and not just the poetry. I love that it starts after Anna, the handprint has so much unspoken meaning, how Cas saves him after Alastair with just words, and then when he realizes it's Cas it's like there's hope again :)

I LOVE it. Seriously. Thank you so much for filling my silly prompt with something so beautiful.

alicat713 June 19 2010, 00:15:06 UTC

I'm so, so so so happy you liked this. :D I'm glad you thought it was poetic - it's something I was trying for, but I kept getting interrupted while writing today so I had no idea how it would translate once finished. I don't have a beta for SPN fandom so you got the rough draft, too.

Your comment has made my day, seriously. I'm so glad you had such a cool prompt and I'm SO very happy you're satisfied with what I came up with. I'll be honest, I had to guess at what some of the magnets in that set would be, but I did try to use as many as I could see in the box as possible. ;)

hrtslkths June 19 2010, 17:08:18 UTC

I selfishly encourage you to continue foisting your rough drafts upon me :) I'll try to keep thinking of prompts. Totally equal burden of work! [/sarcasm]

mulder200 June 19 2010, 16:03:51 UTC

Ah! That was just beautiful and sweet!

fae_calumnae June 19 2010, 21:43:32 UTC

Oh my god, you used the magnetic poetry so well. I want to leave notes on people's cars now, lol.