Firefly Fic: Ten and One

Sep 28, 2007 22:36

Title: Ten and One
Author: alianora
Fandom: Firefly
Rating: PG
Summery: several_ways challange: Several ways to get away with murder.

Look, River's nuts. Its not like I can tell what the hell she's doing most of the time.

sneaky, suspicious, supercilious )

firefly fic

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rinalin September 30 2007, 02:56:55 UTC
Oooh. Gods.

Haunting and...not creepy. It's phatasmatic. It's a word. Look it up.

Given the subject matter (looking at it darkly) it should be creepy as all hell, and it's not. It's... sweet.

And your prose... GOD WOMAN YOUR PROSE!

I wish I could write like that.

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aliaspiral October 4 2007, 17:45:24 UTC
awww. thank you! Writing Riverspeak is some odd form of therapy for me, some days, so Im glad the sweetness comes through. :)

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eustacia_vye28 October 4 2007, 13:09:12 UTC
mmmm... clanging and tangential and absolutely crazy. I love the way you use the words. With the language so damaged, it's impossible to tell what River's actually doing. I love it!

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aliaspiral October 4 2007, 17:50:38 UTC
i LOVE playing with Riverspeak. Its so fun. And i dont actually know if she pranked them all, or they're all dead - she wont tell me.

Thank you! And now i have to go read YOUR new Riverspeak. Wheee!

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eustacia_vye28 October 4 2007, 20:12:53 UTC
i love the ambiguity in these fics. Half the time I don't bother to come up with an actual ending for these because there doesn't need to be one. Tho for "Blue," I did have an ending and it certainly wasn't happy.

I like Riverspeak. Next Tuesday they're making us go to some all-resident conference that's a complete waste of time. I'm bringing my notebook with me. It's a loffly green bamboo pattern on the cover, very FF-verse. I'm hoping to be inspired with more Riverspeak goodness. :D

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thegranddewru October 4 2007, 15:11:17 UTC
Every time I tried to comment something got in the way! It was crazy. This is great! You always so amazing stuff with River.

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aliaspiral October 4 2007, 17:57:40 UTC
hee! that happens sometimes. thanks for commenting, though! and thank you!

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