Response to challenge 43, "Over Dinner"

Nov 07, 2005 19:34

Set between seasons two and three; no spoilers beyond season three. My first fic here.

Over Dinner )

challenge: over dinner, author: wottie

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yahtzee63 November 8 2005, 15:26:25 UTC
Interesting take on Julia! I like this.

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wottie November 9 2005, 09:02:40 UTC
Thank you very much!

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quiet_rebel November 8 2005, 19:25:16 UTC
Welcome to the community!

I like this take on the duality with Julia/Sydney.

Julia chews; Sydney swallows. Sydney thinks; Julia does. Julia listens; Sydney hears.
Shows that Julia is the agressor and Sydney is passive.

The ending was also an indication on the juxaposition with both personalities.

Good work!

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wottie November 9 2005, 09:03:50 UTC
Thanks. IMO, this is kind of what she does every time she gets into an Alias; Sydney Bristow switches off and lurks in the background while whatever else takes over. Julia is just a small exception, I guess, cos she was so permanent and major.

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alittlebriton November 8 2005, 21:09:12 UTC
This was excellent! I especially loved:

The doctor sits back, pleased, and they - all three of them - finish the rest of their meals in silence.

Just the idea of Sydney being inside Julia, and then in S3, Julia being inside Sydney - very nice symmetry.

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wottie November 9 2005, 09:04:33 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked that bit.

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sunshine_queen November 9 2005, 00:32:55 UTC
Oh, that was fantastic. I'm still absurdly interested by the appearance and life of Julia Thorne, and where/what Sydney was doing the whole time. And there she is, sitting inside Julia like a little Russian doll.

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wottie November 9 2005, 09:05:15 UTC
Hehe. little Russian doll? That's a nice comparison. I'm glad you liked the fic!

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counteragent November 9 2005, 02:45:04 UTC
Nice job!

I love thinking about Julia and Sydney and where they break apart into two. Thanks for sharing.

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wottie November 9 2005, 09:05:32 UTC
Thank you for reading! ^_^

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